Comment from Grasshopper2

Excellent

It is ironic that FanStory minimum length feedback is three times as long as your poem. Congratulations on winning the poem about pets contest with 1/6/1 syllable counts; you deserve to win.

 Comment Written 19-Sep-2016

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reply by the author on 19-Sep-2016

Thanks so much for your review and congratulations, they are greatly appreciated. Blessings..................Portia

Comment from RYME4U

Excellent

This is well written. I love the way you have presented this and the praying kitten metaphor is well done. Great contest entry

 Comment Written 11-Sep-2016

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reply by the author on 11-Sep-2016

Thanks so much for your review and rating................................

Comment from Cindy Warren

Excellent

That's sweet. Of course, when my cats were kittens they didn't care if the day was done. They had just as much fun at night. Love the picture. Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 10-Sep-2016

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reply by the author on 10-Sep-2016

Cindy,
Thanks so much for your review, very kind comments and best wishes. Blessings.........................

Comment from prettybluebirds

Excellent

Excellent. Aww, this is so cute. I'm a cat person so this poem really caught my fancy. It is well-written and a joy to read. I didn't spot any errors, and of course, I love the artwork. Great work. Best of luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 10-Sep-2016

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reply by the author on 10-Sep-2016

Thanks so much for your review, very kind comments and best wishes. Blessings..........................