Comment from amada

Excellent

Congratulations in winning the contest. This is a very clever answer to the 5-7-5 insect challenge. I have seen those little ants are work; they deserve recognizion!

 Comment Written 06-Sep-2016

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reply by the author on 06-Sep-2016

Thanks so much for your review, rating and the congratulations they are greatly appreciated. Blessings........Portia

Comment from Ric Myworld

Excellent

Those lucky ol' ants always seem to have a better feast than the picnickers who bring all the food to the picnic. Thanks for sharing your fine poem, and good luck in the contest. :-)

 Comment Written 05-Sep-2016

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reply by the author on 06-Sep-2016

Thanks so much for your review, very kind comments and best wishes. Blessings...................

Comment from Judy Couch

Excellent

They always seem to be hungry and looking for food. This is especially true it there is a picnic. They assume that they're invited.

 Comment Written 05-Sep-2016

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reply by the author on 05-Sep-2016

Judy,

Thanks so much for your review and rating. Blessings.......................

Comment from cumulus365

Excellent

Your poem meets all of the requirements of the entry. The meaning covers the insect. One idea for the style is in the present tense for the fleeting moment. Otherwise, the poem grabs it.

 Comment Written 05-Sep-2016

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reply by the author on 05-Sep-2016

Thanks so much for your review and rating. Blessings......................

Comment from Ogden

Excellent

In my opinion, the best in the contest. Funny, unpretentious, and with terrific imagery! The little freeloaders probably had a better time than their hosts.

 Comment Written 05-Sep-2016

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reply by the author on 05-Sep-2016

Thanks so much for such an outstanding review, your rating and very kind comments are greatly appreciated. Blessings......

Comment from johngie

Excellent

Mystery Author,

Nice job on the 5-7-5 format for insects.

Syllable count is right on.

Best of luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 04-Sep-2016

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reply by the author on 04-Sep-2016

Thanks so much for your review, rating and best wishes. Blessings............................

Comment from tfawcus

Excellent

There is no doubt that no picnic is complete without them! LOL This is an amusing 5-7-5 for the contest that sets your reader itching and scratching. Good luck!

 Comment Written 04-Sep-2016

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reply by the author on 04-Sep-2016

Thanks so much for your review, rating and best wishes. Blessings..........................

Comment from rjuselius

Excellent

this is a fine entry for this particular writing prompt dear anonymous! however you have centred the whole poem which means you have used the advanced editor. please fix this so you won't be disqualified.
thank you for sharing!
good luck!
blessings!
rebekka x

 Comment Written 04-Sep-2016

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reply by the author on 04-Sep-2016

Rebekka,

Thanks so much for your rating review and best wishes. I really appreciate the heads up about centering the poem, your kindness is greatly appreciated. Blessings...........................