Thunderstorm
A six year old during a thunderstorm.2 total reviews
Comment from JanPerry
I can see that you hate thunder storms and all it's scary connotations. I think it's very intellectual for a six year old to be thinking in these terms.
ie. rainbow peaks through misty shroud. Would a six year old be able to think in such advanced revelations? Probably never.
However, from a mature point of view it's more interesting.
Thanks.
reply by the author on 03-Sep-2016
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I can see that you hate thunder storms and all it's scary connotations. I think it's very intellectual for a six year old to be thinking in these terms.
ie. rainbow peaks through misty shroud. Would a six year old be able to think in such advanced revelations? Probably never.
However, from a mature point of view it's more interesting.
Thanks.
Comment Written 03-Sep-2016
reply by the author on 03-Sep-2016
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Thanks for input.
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written poem about childhood and the big scary world with its rumbling noises and lightning strikes are very scary to a six-year.
reply by the author on 03-Sep-2016
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A very well-written poem about childhood and the big scary world with its rumbling noises and lightning strikes are very scary to a six-year.
Comment Written 03-Sep-2016
reply by the author on 03-Sep-2016
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Thanks for the read and your comment.
