Comment from winnona

Excellent

I think you nailed this contest. Your words are so true and real. I think you completed the challenge of this contest well. Good luck ion the contest. Well done

 Comment Written 03-Sep-2016

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reply by the author on 03-Sep-2016

Thanks for the review. Everyone thinks people are having a better time in the big homes, but I think I would rather be by the tracks, hah. Cheers, j

Comment from RYME4U

Excellent

Very well done. I love the comparison of the two lifestyle . That is often how it is. The rhyme and rhythm are excellent and the illustration is welol chosen

 Comment Written 01-Sep-2016

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reply by the author on 01-Sep-2016

Thanks for the reply. I was not sure how to punctuate a song. People often think that the people in the mansions are having a wonderful time, but I usually have more fun by the tracks, cheers, j

Comment from Sandra du Plessis

Excellent

A very well-written Christmas reality. There is no joy in the Mansion their lives are revolving around technology and luxury. The poor still have joy in the little they have but each other.

 Comment Written 01-Sep-2016

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reply by the author on 01-Sep-2016

Thanks for the review, I have no idea how to write a song, cheers, j

Comment from PoemsOfDD

Excellent

Judester, I really enjoyed your Christmas 'song'. It is a very well written story giving an example of how a well off family and a poor family may celebrate Christmas Day. Two very good comparisons. Just a small edit on the way 'I phones' is written - iPhone.
Thanks for a great read. ~DD

 Comment Written 01-Sep-2016

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reply by the author on 01-Sep-2016

Thanks for the review and advice. I guess you can tell in which house I am celebrating, ha ha Merry Christmas, j

reply by PoemsOfDD on 01-Sep-2016

J, Merry Ho Ho Ho :-) ~DD