Comment from EMB

Excellent

"Ice and Salt" sounds like the title of one of those Game of Thrones novels, but you don't have anything following this, so . . . yeah. Not so much, methinks. :)

 Comment Written 26-Sep-2016

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reply by the author on 27-Sep-2016

Well thanks EMB. FOR visiting!
Ricky 1024.

Comment from Wabigoon

Excellent

Ricky--
I am not going to get into "problems," of which there are many here. You are, over time, writing a bit more carefully and that's to your credit.

I like aspects of this a lot -- the Annie Oakley bit, the channeling that never shuts off, the Father of Spices, etc. You have a lot here to work with.

Keep it up and if you can cut down the number of problems.

Best
Wabigoon/Jeff

 Comment Written 27-Aug-2016

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reply by the author on 27-Aug-2016

Thanks I found a few grammar issues.
Re-read and tell me what you think?
Ricky

Comment from PoemsOfDD

Excellent

Ricky1024, this is a very interesting children's story to review. I'm not sure if I should be reviewing it though as all I see is your special thanks going out and your "Ice and Salt?"
By Ricky1024
Written on August 24th, 2016 at 2:43PM. EST.
Coming later today
Ricky...
I presume there will be more so I shall give it a five for the intrigue :-) ~DD

 Comment Written 27-Aug-2016

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reply by the author on 27-Aug-2016

Thanks, 'Ice and Salt' will be presented today at 10:00AM. EAT.
Ricky 1024