To Last Forever
Viewing comments for Chapter 21 "Virtuous "Poems by Michael
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Comment from Ronni
Hello Michael...
You have this most momentous and abiding well spring of a true romantic
and a rare, omnipotent caressing capacity of a forever kind of love held
within, conveyed in a sensually searching mood and tone. It especially
breathes and sighs in every phrase in this magnificent reflection. as always
revealing your indomitable optimistic spirit and patient expectation.
An intimate revelry of emotions embraced in a private sanctuary. perpetually
imbued in a warm mixture of wonderment and unspoken truth and troth.
Perfect video for this most precious and profound love.
This is you..at and in your best poetic element and always awesome you.
Thanks for sharing....truly exceptional presentation.
luv/always, Ronni
P.S. Have been gone all summer on vacation to roots in E. Europe which
turned out to be a kind of ancestral sabbatical...yet truly enlightening.
So have been off here for while, and likely missed more of your posts,
but will try to catch up. Hope all is going great with you. always, Ronni
reply by the author on 26-Aug-2016
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Hello Michael...
You have this most momentous and abiding well spring of a true romantic
and a rare, omnipotent caressing capacity of a forever kind of love held
within, conveyed in a sensually searching mood and tone. It especially
breathes and sighs in every phrase in this magnificent reflection. as always
revealing your indomitable optimistic spirit and patient expectation.
An intimate revelry of emotions embraced in a private sanctuary. perpetually
imbued in a warm mixture of wonderment and unspoken truth and troth.
Perfect video for this most precious and profound love.
This is you..at and in your best poetic element and always awesome you.
Thanks for sharing....truly exceptional presentation.
luv/always, Ronni
P.S. Have been gone all summer on vacation to roots in E. Europe which
turned out to be a kind of ancestral sabbatical...yet truly enlightening.
So have been off here for while, and likely missed more of your posts,
but will try to catch up. Hope all is going great with you. always, Ronni
Comment Written 26-Aug-2016
reply by the author on 26-Aug-2016
you make me sound like you...unforgettable.
-smile-....missed you.
yes that is me....perfect.....but I'm only half way there. vacationing in Europe...oh yes....I couldn't remember the last I'd been there. but you remind me...of special. welcome home...always love michael
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Missed you too...likewise because of
being unforgettable! Just keep staying
perfectly awesome...and you can't loose!
"special" will always remain mutual..
thank you! smile and love as only
you can! Luv/always Ronni
Comment from TPAC
Writer defining their terms of relationship captures ones interests, personal feeling compelling their desires with inspiring sentiments of togetherness. Heart felt views of live in my view.
reply by the author on 28-Aug-2016
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Writer defining their terms of relationship captures ones interests, personal feeling compelling their desires with inspiring sentiments of togetherness. Heart felt views of live in my view.
Comment Written 26-Aug-2016
reply by the author on 28-Aug-2016
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Thank you so much...-smile-
happy you enjoyed ....love Michael
Comment from djsaxon
Michael, I just love your pen, you know that. You and Maureen and little else - maybe the enigmatic strandregs also. He makes me laugh. Mo makes me cry. You make me think. If you haven't already, send Mo your love in a PM. much love little bro - DJ
reply by the author on 26-Aug-2016
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Michael, I just love your pen, you know that. You and Maureen and little else - maybe the enigmatic strandregs also. He makes me laugh. Mo makes me cry. You make me think. If you haven't already, send Mo your love in a PM. much love little bro - DJ
Comment Written 26-Aug-2016
reply by the author on 26-Aug-2016
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Hey DJ.....-smile-
ah there are many here who's voices can be and are ocean roar.
but I thank you for the honor of your respect friend. you know I dont do a lot of that...PM-ing....I dont want wrong impressions and stuff. I did with Mo.....the last time I just said goodnight. I will....thank you for the push. Do you know I called Pam....hours before she left. so freaking wonderful....Pili...was worried sick....kept wondering to me where she was...if she was alright. I hadn't spoken to her for over a year. after I acted like an idiot. ah one day Pili was really upset so I told her that I had her number and would call...but I chickened out....until the next day. she forgave me man....I'm so glad I called...-smile- I'm sorry I havent been around much....I work a lot now. I'm sorry. love to you Bro....Michael
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PM Mo and say good morning. She is slowly awaking from a long sleep. Stay true - love DJ
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I will DJ....let me go through the process of chickening out. you see She is is very special to me. ...I dont want anything to ruin that....stupid huh...ah ha....well I will I promise.
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You goose! I know about special and I know about nervous. Don't be. When I summoned up the courage to make contact I chose to be a little frivolous. as in "What's with the headaches, girlfriend? You are obviously not eating enough of my chocolate mousse :-)" She loved it. She certainly doesn't want sympathy. When you do make contact, just be YOU. DJ xx
Comment from chiversmisha
Loved this! The writing was smooth with wonderful visuals. It was well written and touching. It helps me to remember my love I lost 17 years ago.
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Loved this! The writing was smooth with wonderful visuals. It was well written and touching. It helps me to remember my love I lost 17 years ago.
Comment Written 25-Aug-2016
Comment from nancyrabbrose
A quite eloquent poem. Well stated. Beautiful. It flows nicely. I would recommend it to anyone who needs to feel what love is all about.
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A quite eloquent poem. Well stated. Beautiful. It flows nicely. I would recommend it to anyone who needs to feel what love is all about.
Comment Written 25-Aug-2016
Comment from CEO2020
"through lazy eyes
between golden earth tones and heavens shade
I see us love made"
should that be...I see our love made?
reply by the author on 25-Aug-2016
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"through lazy eyes
between golden earth tones and heavens shade
I see us love made"
should that be...I see our love made?
Comment Written 25-Aug-2016
reply by the author on 25-Aug-2016
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Hi...-smile-
no...it should be as you read. had I written about "off spring" perhaps....or a love once knew never again hoped for...it would work. but this is a living love still breathing possible. so it is correct the way Its written. thank you...love Michael
Comment from Javed05
I like this piece and enjoyed reading it .it is engaging for the reader.it flows smoothly .language used is great.It creates good imagery.thanks for sharing with us
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I like this piece and enjoyed reading it .it is engaging for the reader.it flows smoothly .language used is great.It creates good imagery.thanks for sharing with us
Comment Written 25-Aug-2016
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
I can only give you a virtual 6, dear Michael. I thought this poem was so lovely, romantic, sweet, everything I think that love is about.... I see us love made, through these lazy eyes... Where do you get these thoughts from? You have a lovely soul, my friend. Love you, Michael. Sandy. xx
reply by the author on 25-Aug-2016
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I can only give you a virtual 6, dear Michael. I thought this poem was so lovely, romantic, sweet, everything I think that love is about.... I see us love made, through these lazy eyes... Where do you get these thoughts from? You have a lovely soul, my friend. Love you, Michael. Sandy. xx
Comment Written 25-Aug-2016
reply by the author on 25-Aug-2016
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Hi Sandy...-smile-
your presents is all the six I need. right...me too...-smile-...ah from inside me....the deep me. are you okay...? how is your Brother...? love you too...-smile-...always Michael
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I love that 'deep you' that is inside you ... ' part, it sums you up perfectly. :)
Ian has good days and bad days, but on the whole he is trying to stay positive. You would like him Michael, he has a gentle soul too. Bless you, my dear friend, for asking. Love always. xx
Comment from Mastery
Outstanding poetry, Reconciled:
Especially these lines:
"between golden earth tones and heavens shade
I see us love made
through these lazy eyes"
Bravo! Very well done. Bob
reply by the author on 25-Aug-2016
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Outstanding poetry, Reconciled:
Especially these lines:
"between golden earth tones and heavens shade
I see us love made
through these lazy eyes"
Bravo! Very well done. Bob
Comment Written 24-Aug-2016
reply by the author on 25-Aug-2016
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Hey Bob...-smile-
thank you Sir...appreciate the stop by. glad you enjoyed. love Michael
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Glad to see you still posting. :) Bob
Comment from rbutner
Beautiful poem. To me it is about a passionate love, both raw and wild and pure and beautiful. The imagery is quite arresting, and I love it. I really enjoy the way you write.
Renee
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2016
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Beautiful poem. To me it is about a passionate love, both raw and wild and pure and beautiful. The imagery is quite arresting, and I love it. I really enjoy the way you write.
Renee
Comment Written 24-Aug-2016
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2016
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exactly....-smile-
thank you Renee. I happy you enjoyed this with me. love Michael
