Comment from LoannaLois

Excellent

You have managed to put my feeble brain cells into overdrive with your intelligent and interesting take on our souls. That it is not immortal is the real "rub", isn't it? If it has its own brain to act upon its own ideas, then it just might be able to animate another inanimate object. Nice take on this!

 Comment Written 16-Aug-2016

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reply by the author on 16-Aug-2016

Thank you for your comments and the read.

Comment from Susanne M. Psyris

Excellent

Nice entry into the Soul Writer contest. Makes the reviewer really step back and think about what was written. Like the line: "Because it is the life principle that animates our body." Nice choice of wording created a great read for me. Good luck in the contest. God bless and hugs, Susanne

 Comment Written 16-Aug-2016

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reply by the author on 16-Aug-2016

Thanks, Susanne, for the comments and the read.

Comment from Bridge

Excellent

A well written piece. It raises an interesting point at the end. I personally have always believed that souls were immortal. All the best in the contest.
Regards

 Comment Written 15-Aug-2016

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reply by the author on 15-Aug-2016

Thanks for taking the time to read.

Comment from jusylee72

Excellent

Interesting and in depth description of a soul. Your words are also controversial in your last few statements. Does the soul die with us? If so then was it ever a soul? Good poem. Good questions.

 Comment Written 15-Aug-2016

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reply by the author on 15-Aug-2016

Thanks for the read and the comments. Soul is the life principle of the body, it animates the body and dies along with it. Just my opinion.