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ShedMoreTears Fairy Tales@Fables"

Viewing comments for Chapter 35 "Boo-Berry and Cran-Berry"
A delightful Childen Lesson Book.

5 total reviews 
Comment from Mystic Angel 7777
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This is delightful! I love the idea of these fruity folks migrating like the birds. Truly a creative approach to story telling. Nicely done and I thank you very much for sharing it.

 Comment Written 16-Aug-2016


reply by the author on 16-Aug-2016
    Thanks ever so much for enjoying this Angel.
    Ricky1024.
Comment from Lulube
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WOW what a lot of fun going on inside your head. lol there's definitely a union coming up, I can feel it. lol great penning, narrating in dialogue mostly is a great gift. Your characters come alive with their accents. I gave them accents cause I thought you'd be talking like that when writing.
can't wait to check out part 2

and holy cow, or whatever, thxs so much for the awesome labelling for my photo. I usually eat more than I pick and photo. lol

lulube

 Comment Written 16-Aug-2016


reply by the author on 16-Aug-2016
    Thank you to Lulube!
    Ricky...
reply by Lulube on 17-Aug-2016
    welcome and a big thxs back

    lulube
Comment from Liberty Justice
Exceptional
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SIX SHINY STARS! VERY LIVELY! Ricky it's so refreshing to read a happy comical story about fruits. Characters play significant part and fruit as actors and actresses are very entertaining. A truly delight to read! liberty justice

 Comment Written 13-Aug-2016


reply by the author on 16-Aug-2016
    Thanks for the six Libery.
    Ricky..
reply by Liberty Justice on 16-Aug-2016
    Youre very welcome, Ricky 1024. I enjoyed your "light-hearted" story. How are you doing these days? Don't worry; be happy! lol my dear fan friend. liberty justice
Comment from jlsavell
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ricky1024, maybe I need to take a break. I am not getting this post. Is it suppose to be for children. However, it does remind me of one of Frank L. Baums work called the Mangaboos. He wrote the Wizard of Oz, and its about vegetable beings where Dorothy visits with the wizard.. please forgive me.. jlsavell

 Comment Written 13-Aug-2016


reply by the author on 16-Aug-2016
    Why thanks ever so muchjlsavell for stopping by!
    Ricky...
Comment from prettybluebirds
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Excellent. Good to hear from you again, Ricky. This is certainly a different style of writing from you usual. It is an enjoyable read and most interesting. I will watch for more.

 Comment Written 13-Aug-2016


reply by the author on 16-Aug-2016
    Why thank you for stopping by Miss Pretty Blue Birds!
    Ricky..