In a nutshell.
A very short story, 150 words.16 total reviews
Comment from BeasPeas
I enjoyed reading this. You have kept it interesting all the way through. Put some humor within the story progressing from birth up to the present. Good job. Marilyn
reply by the author on 15-Aug-2016
I enjoyed reading this. You have kept it interesting all the way through. Put some humor within the story progressing from birth up to the present. Good job. Marilyn
Comment Written 12-Aug-2016
reply by the author on 15-Aug-2016
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Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a lovely week.
Comment from frogbook
A great job you did, though well agreed that it was quite a chore, paring it down to the 150 words. I enjoyed the challenge though. Excellent job and I wish you the best of luck.
reply by the author on 15-Aug-2016
A great job you did, though well agreed that it was quite a chore, paring it down to the 150 words. I enjoyed the challenge though. Excellent job and I wish you the best of luck.
Comment Written 12-Aug-2016
reply by the author on 15-Aug-2016
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Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a lovely week.
Comment from Dean Kuch
Well, you asked who could write his life story in just 150 words, and it looks to me as if you've done just that.
So, I suppose you answered your own question (which, by the way, used up nine of your one-hundred and fifty allotted words, more or less).
Best wishes to you in the contest.
reply by the author on 15-Aug-2016
Well, you asked who could write his life story in just 150 words, and it looks to me as if you've done just that.
So, I suppose you answered your own question (which, by the way, used up nine of your one-hundred and fifty allotted words, more or less).
Best wishes to you in the contest.
Comment Written 12-Aug-2016
reply by the author on 15-Aug-2016
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Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a lovely week.
Comment from Janet Foor
It is difficult to come up with a life story in 150 words. Do did a good job with it and I'm happy to hear that after a whirlwind romance, you and your husband are still together.
Well done
Blessings
Janet
reply by the author on 15-Aug-2016
It is difficult to come up with a life story in 150 words. Do did a good job with it and I'm happy to hear that after a whirlwind romance, you and your husband are still together.
Well done
Blessings
Janet
Comment Written 12-Aug-2016
reply by the author on 15-Aug-2016
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Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a lovely week.
Comment from barkingdog
It looks like you did one hell of a job--an autobiography in 150 words.
You managed to take us from birth (loved the eight Dutch pounds) to the present in five concrete paragraphs.
Bravo!
Good luck in the contest.
:) e
reply by the author on 15-Aug-2016
It looks like you did one hell of a job--an autobiography in 150 words.
You managed to take us from birth (loved the eight Dutch pounds) to the present in five concrete paragraphs.
Bravo!
Good luck in the contest.
:) e
Comment Written 12-Aug-2016
reply by the author on 15-Aug-2016
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Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a lovely week.
Comment from dejohnsrld (Debbie)
This basically ends with your marriage--not much after that. I would like to have heard more about the time after that since this is about your whole life. What is here is well written. Best wishes in the contest, my friend~Debbie
reply by the author on 15-Aug-2016
This basically ends with your marriage--not much after that. I would like to have heard more about the time after that since this is about your whole life. What is here is well written. Best wishes in the contest, my friend~Debbie
Comment Written 12-Aug-2016
reply by the author on 15-Aug-2016
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Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a lovely week.
Comment from rjuselius
This is an interesting peek into your life dear anonymous! I think you have captured the essence of your existence.
Thank you for sharing!
Good luck!
Blessings!
Rebekka x
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2016
This is an interesting peek into your life dear anonymous! I think you have captured the essence of your existence.
Thank you for sharing!
Good luck!
Blessings!
Rebekka x
Comment Written 11-Aug-2016
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2016
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Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a good weekend.
Comment from Bill Schott
This synopsis of your life, In a Nutshell, starts with an opener to introduce the topic in twelve words. This assumes we don't know the theme of the mini-biography, which I think is good. You are the oldest child, lots of boys, Doctor, married, and happy. Nice encapsulation.
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2016
This synopsis of your life, In a Nutshell, starts with an opener to introduce the topic in twelve words. This assumes we don't know the theme of the mini-biography, which I think is good. You are the oldest child, lots of boys, Doctor, married, and happy. Nice encapsulation.
Comment Written 11-Aug-2016
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2016
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Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a good weekend.
Comment from LIJ Red
One hundred and fifty words is enough for a rolodex card history. You
can get the bones of the beast, but no flavor much. You did quite well.
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2016
One hundred and fifty words is enough for a rolodex card history. You
can get the bones of the beast, but no flavor much. You did quite well.
Comment Written 11-Aug-2016
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2016
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Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a good weekend.
Comment from Thomas Bowling
I guess you can write about your life in 150 words or less. You seem to have done a good job encapsulating your being. Good luck in the contest. My entry is titled "Life Reflections"
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2016
I guess you can write about your life in 150 words or less. You seem to have done a good job encapsulating your being. Good luck in the contest. My entry is titled "Life Reflections"
Comment Written 11-Aug-2016
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2016
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Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a good weekend.