Superman
Acrostic love poem5 total reviews
Comment from Richard J
Goodness, Susan!
Whomever this super lover is, is one lucky guy, and receiving such a romantic promise from so amazingly lovely and delightful a lady has surely set him flying high and his heart beating at sonic speed.
This is about as lovingly delightful as it gets, and that gorgeous illustration set the blood a'stir.
It is pure bliss to even begin imagining anyone composing such a piece to me ... sighhh! ~ Richard
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2016
  |
Goodness, Susan!
Whomever this super lover is, is one lucky guy, and receiving such a romantic promise from so amazingly lovely and delightful a lady has surely set him flying high and his heart beating at sonic speed.
This is about as lovingly delightful as it gets, and that gorgeous illustration set the blood a'stir.
It is pure bliss to even begin imagining anyone composing such a piece to me ... sighhh! ~ Richard
Comment Written 23-Oct-2016
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2016
-
:-) you liked this one!..thank you Richard!!
-
Sure thing, Susan ... it was my pleasure.
Comment from WalkerMan
This is an excellent acrostic poem with couplet rhymes and clear expression of the reasons for the love felt. Meter (which is not required by the rules) is irregular, but not to a disruptive extent while reading, partly because the syllable count by line is a roughly similar seven to nine. As the primary purpose of a poem pertaining to emotion is to effectively convey that feeling, this acrostic succeeds well.
reply by the author on 11-Aug-2016
 |
This is an excellent acrostic poem with couplet rhymes and clear expression of the reasons for the love felt. Meter (which is not required by the rules) is irregular, but not to a disruptive extent while reading, partly because the syllable count by line is a roughly similar seven to nine. As the primary purpose of a poem pertaining to emotion is to effectively convey that feeling, this acrostic succeeds well.
Comment Written 10-Aug-2016
reply by the author on 11-Aug-2016
-
:-) yes i know, meter and i have not been getting along well, so we are taking a break from each other. Free verse has entered my life...with no expectations! we'll see how it goes! lol thanks for reading and the excellent review!!! truly appreciate!!!
-
You're welcome. Free verse turns me off unless it is well written in other respects. This poem meets that standard. -- Mike
-
wait..there are rules too for free verse!!!
-
Yes, though most of what I have seen appears to have none. I like the way you did this one. -- Mike
Comment from Susanne M. Psyris
A beautiful entry into the Romance Acrostic poetry contest. Definitely a romantic piece. Lovely writing. Wish you best in the contest. God bless and hugs, Susanne
reply by the author on 10-Aug-2016
|
A beautiful entry into the Romance Acrostic poetry contest. Definitely a romantic piece. Lovely writing. Wish you best in the contest. God bless and hugs, Susanne
Comment Written 10-Aug-2016
reply by the author on 10-Aug-2016
-
Thank you so much!!!
Comment from Heather Knight
This is a great entry for the acrostic poem competition.
I love the title and also the picture you've chosen.
Good luck!
reply by the author on 06-Aug-2016
|
This is a great entry for the acrostic poem competition.
I love the title and also the picture you've chosen.
Good luck!
Comment Written 06-Aug-2016
reply by the author on 06-Aug-2016
-
Oh thank you so much!!! Appreciated you reading and the review!!!
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
I enjoyed your love poem acrostic. You did a great job with the prompt. The artwork is perfect. Your lines flow smoothly & readers can feel the strong emotions.
tiny suggestion:
Shoulding 3rd line--should it be shouldering
Good job & best wishes in the contest. Jan
reply by the author on 05-Aug-2016
|
I enjoyed your love poem acrostic. You did a great job with the prompt. The artwork is perfect. Your lines flow smoothly & readers can feel the strong emotions.
tiny suggestion:
Shoulding 3rd line--should it be shouldering
Good job & best wishes in the contest. Jan
Comment Written 05-Aug-2016
reply by the author on 05-Aug-2016
-
Yes!! thank you for catching that!!! ....glad you liked it!!! thanks for reading and the review!! much appreciated friend!!
