Scenes
Viewing comments for Chapter 5 "Scene at an Art Exhibit"Pons and Ned meet at different locations
16 total reviews
Comment from pbomar1115
Pons likes his cousin Ned. He puts up with his inability to see the world and man's creation as the average person does. Ned is in a world of his own.
Phillip
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2018
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Pons likes his cousin Ned. He puts up with his inability to see the world and man's creation as the average person does. Ned is in a world of his own.
Phillip
Comment Written 18-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2018
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Ned is cultured like cottage cheese.
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Hahaha.
Comment from Rasmine
This is okay. I had a hard time with the speech, but that's okay. This would probably be funny on stage. :)
I hope you are doing okay.
Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2018
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This is okay. I had a hard time with the speech, but that's okay. This would probably be funny on stage. :)
I hope you are doing okay.
Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 17-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2018
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Thanks, Rasmine
Comment from apky
Bill, honestly. This was absolutely ingenious. I was all over the office desk gyrating with laughter- good thing hubby didn't catch me at it, because knowing how he knows me, he would have joined me right on top of the desk ready to gyrate with me.
I wish I had a six left.
Pons: Finished?
Ned: Yeah. He still needs ta put some dern hands and feet on these folks. What about heads?
Hilarious...
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2018
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Bill, honestly. This was absolutely ingenious. I was all over the office desk gyrating with laughter- good thing hubby didn't catch me at it, because knowing how he knows me, he would have joined me right on top of the desk ready to gyrate with me.
I wish I had a six left.
Pons: Finished?
Ned: Yeah. He still needs ta put some dern hands and feet on these folks. What about heads?
Hilarious...
Comment Written 17-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2018
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Thank you, apky. Ned is a piece of work, for sure.
Comment from Marge Setzer
I'm still laughing. The ending was perfect. The dialogue was reminiscent of the first time I was exposed to modern art which to me had no meaning at all. It makes me wonder about the relationship of these two other than the fact that they're cousins. I think the tongue-in-cheek quality of the conversation was brilliant and funny...not to be taken seriously. Great idea for a couple of comedians, kind of like an Abbot and Costello discussion. Curious about the other one-scene scripts you've written. Thanks for sharing. Marge
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2018
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I'm still laughing. The ending was perfect. The dialogue was reminiscent of the first time I was exposed to modern art which to me had no meaning at all. It makes me wonder about the relationship of these two other than the fact that they're cousins. I think the tongue-in-cheek quality of the conversation was brilliant and funny...not to be taken seriously. Great idea for a couple of comedians, kind of like an Abbot and Costello discussion. Curious about the other one-scene scripts you've written. Thanks for sharing. Marge
Comment Written 17-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2018
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So glad you liked it, Marge. I?m running them through one more time before getting them bound. If you wait I?m Trying to put some rewards on them.
Comment from Debbie Pope
I love your stuff because I love to laugh. I admire the lofty, beautiful image so many poets create. But you make me laugh every time. You are the gifted one in my mind. Thanks again.
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2018
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I love your stuff because I love to laugh. I admire the lofty, beautiful image so many poets create. But you make me laugh every time. You are the gifted one in my mind. Thanks again.
Comment Written 15-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2018
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Thanks, Debbie. I find it easier to make people laugh than inspire them poetically.
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Use your gift. I am enjoying it
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
This tells a scene placed briefly interestingly and humorously and hypocritically that one carries mistaken attitude and appreciation despite truth is evidently seen; well said, well done. Thank you for sharing this with us. KEEP WRITING, TIP CHANGING. DR ALCREATOR
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2018
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This tells a scene placed briefly interestingly and humorously and hypocritically that one carries mistaken attitude and appreciation despite truth is evidently seen; well said, well done. Thank you for sharing this with us. KEEP WRITING, TIP CHANGING. DR ALCREATOR
Comment Written 15-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2018
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Thanks, ALD
Comment from nomi338
Perception is everything. Depending upon what someone not completely aware of certain things perceive, could make for a very interesting conversation. Trying to change their perception would probably be a waste of time, just listen and laugh.
reply by the author on 10-Aug-2016
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Perception is everything. Depending upon what someone not completely aware of certain things perceive, could make for a very interesting conversation. Trying to change their perception would probably be a waste of time, just listen and laugh.
Comment Written 10-Aug-2016
reply by the author on 10-Aug-2016
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Thank you, nomi, for reviewing this. Bill
Comment from Ulla
God Bill, where the heck do you get it from. I can't hardly write straight from laughter. It's hilarious. I can just visualise it. It should be performed, I hope that will happen. Well done. All the best. Ulla:))
reply by the author on 08-Aug-2016
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God Bill, where the heck do you get it from. I can't hardly write straight from laughter. It's hilarious. I can just visualise it. It should be performed, I hope that will happen. Well done. All the best. Ulla:))
Comment Written 08-Aug-2016
reply by the author on 08-Aug-2016
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Thank you, Ulla, for the uplifting and positive review. Glad I could make you laugh. Bill
Comment from LIJ Red
Okay, the dialog would give the stage hands clues for the set, and I share Ned's conclusions about modern sculpture, and it read smoothly, except for some stuff like gall dang or goldang, and I don't know what's right, there...excellent.
reply by the author on 06-Aug-2016
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Okay, the dialog would give the stage hands clues for the set, and I share Ned's conclusions about modern sculpture, and it read smoothly, except for some stuff like gall dang or goldang, and I don't know what's right, there...excellent.
Comment Written 06-Aug-2016
reply by the author on 06-Aug-2016
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Thank you, LIJ, for reviewing this. Bill
Comment from krys123
Hi Bill;
-I see Ned is at it again with this misunderstanding slang and how far he can go at miscalculating what is by making it what it isn't.
-You write a very funny and humorous script and one that can make one roll over in his grave.
-The most impression I got is that Ned is completely illiterate with an mindful intelligence as big as a pea.
-Thanks for sharing and posting and take care.
Alex
reply by the author on 06-Aug-2016
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Hi Bill;
-I see Ned is at it again with this misunderstanding slang and how far he can go at miscalculating what is by making it what it isn't.
-You write a very funny and humorous script and one that can make one roll over in his grave.
-The most impression I got is that Ned is completely illiterate with an mindful intelligence as big as a pea.
-Thanks for sharing and posting and take care.
Alex
Comment Written 06-Aug-2016
reply by the author on 06-Aug-2016
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Thank you, Alex, for giving this a look. Bill
