"Poetry from My Heart"
Viewing comments for Chapter 8 "His..... Heart's.....On...... Ice!"My thoughts on Life
2 total reviews
Comment from Phyllis Stewart
Not much here... could be a lot longer for a chapter. It seems only one person is talking, so you don't need to repeat quotation marks on every line.
reply by the author on 08-Aug-2016
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Not much here... could be a lot longer for a chapter. It seems only one person is talking, so you don't need to repeat quotation marks on every line.
Comment Written 08-Aug-2016
reply by the author on 08-Aug-2016
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Sorry but it took a lot out of me.
Ricky1024.
Comment from Preston McWhorter
Hi, Ricky,
" His...Hearts...on... Ice" is first rate poetry with good, rhyme excellent figurative language and imagery. The unconventional structure carries its message and meaning. Putting it in your dead son's voice is a bit creepy.
Your friend and colleague,
Preston
reply by the author on 05-Aug-2016
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Hi, Ricky,
" His...Hearts...on... Ice" is first rate poetry with good, rhyme excellent figurative language and imagery. The unconventional structure carries its message and meaning. Putting it in your dead son's voice is a bit creepy.
Your friend and colleague,
Preston
Comment Written 05-Aug-2016
reply by the author on 05-Aug-2016
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Thanks ever so much and and also for taking the time to support my works for Jason
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