Comment from Zachary Ward

Good

A bleeding poem that does well to speak quick and alive on a tragic death. The use of modern and contemporary symbols scattered throughout does well to remind us of the poets stake in the current day and his subject's absence.

 Comment Written 09-Aug-2016

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reply by the author on 10-Aug-2016

Thanks
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Comment from islandergirl

Excellent

I have a lump in my throat just reading this and I'm trying hard to hold back the tears. The pain that you went through is unimaginable to me and I only wish you the best. I hope that God's healing arms wraps around you and gives you comfort.

Beautifully done. My heart goes out to you.

 Comment Written 03-Aug-2016

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reply by the author on 04-Aug-2016

Thanks islanders
girl It is and always will be a pleasure...
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Comment from Mystic Angel 7777

Excellent

You have been through much, but you have not lost faith which is key. Your son and wife are with you always and one day you will all be together again when you meet on that misty cloud above. Nicely done and I thank you very much for sharing it.

 Comment Written 03-Aug-2016

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reply by the author on 03-Aug-2016

Thanks and check my latest piece
"You Are My Shining Star"
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