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Viewing comments for Chapter 28 "Worse By The Minute"Assorted poetry
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Comment from RoostyNester
I loved you cute little minute poem. And I agree totally! I wrote my first one today. To try and make good sense of a chopped up words is a real challenge. I wonder what people would think if we all started talking this way. haha Your poem was humorous and REALLY gave a message.
reply by the author on 14-Aug-2016
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I loved you cute little minute poem. And I agree totally! I wrote my first one today. To try and make good sense of a chopped up words is a real challenge. I wonder what people would think if we all started talking this way. haha Your poem was humorous and REALLY gave a message.
Comment Written 14-Aug-2016
reply by the author on 14-Aug-2016
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Thank you, RN, for the great review. Bill
Comment from Irish Rain
Ha ha...love this...minute poem fails....sorta like my attempts at cooking 'minute rice'....which your picture reminded me of....I think this is quite clever though...I like it....blessings....
reply by the author on 13-Aug-2016
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Ha ha...love this...minute poem fails....sorta like my attempts at cooking 'minute rice'....which your picture reminded me of....I think this is quite clever though...I like it....blessings....
Comment Written 13-Aug-2016
reply by the author on 13-Aug-2016
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Thank you, IR, for the great review. Bill
Comment from Thomas Bowling
Why do we put self imposed limits on creativity. I thought poetry was supposed to express freedom. I recently wrote a poem that had been kicking around in my head for two days. I wrote the poem, ("Why I Write")
I wondered if FanStory had a category for it. I looked and found one.
I think this is a far better way to write.
reply by the author on 13-Aug-2016
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Why do we put self imposed limits on creativity. I thought poetry was supposed to express freedom. I recently wrote a poem that had been kicking around in my head for two days. I wrote the poem, ("Why I Write")
I wondered if FanStory had a category for it. I looked and found one.
I think this is a far better way to write.
Comment Written 13-Aug-2016
reply by the author on 13-Aug-2016
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Thank you, Thomas, for giving this a look. Bill
Comment from Bollie
I'll tell you, this is REALLY good. To write a poem in a particular style about that style is very clever and creative. Really nice job, keep up the good work. Best of luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 13-Aug-2016
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I'll tell you, this is REALLY good. To write a poem in a particular style about that style is very clever and creative. Really nice job, keep up the good work. Best of luck in the contest.
Comment Written 13-Aug-2016
reply by the author on 13-Aug-2016
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Thank you, Bollie, for the great review. Bill
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You're very welcome, Bill. Have a wonderful night.
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You're very welcome, Bill. Have a wonderful night.
Comment from William Ross
hahaha, not bad, nicely done on the minute poem about a minute poem. good wit and humor on this. good luck with this and have a great day.
reply by the author on 13-Aug-2016
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hahaha, not bad, nicely done on the minute poem about a minute poem. good wit and humor on this. good luck with this and have a great day.
Comment Written 13-Aug-2016
reply by the author on 13-Aug-2016
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Thank you, William, for the great review. Bill
Comment from rockinm76233
That's the way I felt, but it was fun. Always is when you challenge yourself don't you think? I enjoyed your Minute poem. Imagine my surprise when it dawned on me that the 60 syllables are the sixty seconds in a minute. Duhhhhh. ha ha.
reply by the author on 13-Aug-2016
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That's the way I felt, but it was fun. Always is when you challenge yourself don't you think? I enjoyed your Minute poem. Imagine my surprise when it dawned on me that the 60 syllables are the sixty seconds in a minute. Duhhhhh. ha ha.
Comment Written 13-Aug-2016
reply by the author on 13-Aug-2016
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Thank you, Rockinm, for the great review. Bill
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Your welcome.
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written minute poem. Tongue in the cheek you did the math one syllable per second and you have written a poem in one minute. Lol.
reply by the author on 13-Aug-2016
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A very well-written minute poem. Tongue in the cheek you did the math one syllable per second and you have written a poem in one minute. Lol.
Comment Written 13-Aug-2016
reply by the author on 13-Aug-2016
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Thank you, Sandra, for the great review. Bill
Comment from Cindy Warren
You might be better at this gosh dang format than you think. You may even have a winner here. And you made me laugh, too. Best of luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 13-Aug-2016
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You might be better at this gosh dang format than you think. You may even have a winner here. And you made me laugh, too. Best of luck in the contest.
Comment Written 13-Aug-2016
reply by the author on 13-Aug-2016
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Thank you, Cindy, for the great review. Bill
Comment from nomi338
No failure here, you know you're good when what you think is a mistake turns out to be a masterpiece. See when you are good you don't need luck. Then there is the guy who is good and he knows it, but he pretends that he is so humble that he does not realize how good he is. That is until someone tells him that he is no good then he forgets his earlier pose and he stands up and say with true conviction, "Hey there. don't you realize I'm a gosh darn genius?!" LOL. I enjoyed your humorous write.
reply by the author on 02-Aug-2016
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No failure here, you know you're good when what you think is a mistake turns out to be a masterpiece. See when you are good you don't need luck. Then there is the guy who is good and he knows it, but he pretends that he is so humble that he does not realize how good he is. That is until someone tells him that he is no good then he forgets his earlier pose and he stands up and say with true conviction, "Hey there. don't you realize I'm a gosh darn genius?!" LOL. I enjoyed your humorous write.
Comment Written 02-Aug-2016
reply by the author on 02-Aug-2016
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Thank you, nomi, for the giving this a look. Bill
Comment from robina1978
Lovely text picture that complements your poem perfectly. It is a Minute poem all right, and an utmost original subject. You write how hard it is for you to use this format. But you made it well. Best wishes for the contest.
reply by the author on 02-Aug-2016
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Lovely text picture that complements your poem perfectly. It is a Minute poem all right, and an utmost original subject. You write how hard it is for you to use this format. But you made it well. Best wishes for the contest.
Comment Written 02-Aug-2016
reply by the author on 02-Aug-2016
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Thank you, Ine, for the excellent review. Bill