Reflections
Reflections aren't always as they seem.18 total reviews
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
You have written a lovely spiritual poem, Lance. I can see where you found these thoughts in the picture, they work so well together. It doesn't matter if we waver, God will steer us in the right direction. Well done, my friend, it was a pleasure to read. :) Sandra xx
reply by the author on 04-Aug-2016
You have written a lovely spiritual poem, Lance. I can see where you found these thoughts in the picture, they work so well together. It doesn't matter if we waver, God will steer us in the right direction. Well done, my friend, it was a pleasure to read. :) Sandra xx
Comment Written 04-Aug-2016
reply by the author on 04-Aug-2016
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Sandra,
Thank you so much for the read and review. I give all glory to God. It's is His gift that allows me to point back to Him. I'm glad you enjoyed it. God bless my friend.
Comment from Chrissy710
Hi LanceHill, A clear overview of you thoughts and refections on life. this image creates some lovely poems and I enjoyed yours very much Nice rhyming and this flowed well Cheers Christine
reply by the author on 03-Aug-2016
Hi LanceHill, A clear overview of you thoughts and refections on life. this image creates some lovely poems and I enjoyed yours very much Nice rhyming and this flowed well Cheers Christine
Comment Written 03-Aug-2016
reply by the author on 03-Aug-2016
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Christine,
Thanks for the read and review. I'm glad you were able to enjoy it. God bless.
Comment from danpald
How well the reflection glows
With the write of this poem
For it turns into a prayer
For the reader to give and share
reply by the author on 03-Aug-2016
How well the reflection glows
With the write of this poem
For it turns into a prayer
For the reader to give and share
Comment Written 03-Aug-2016
reply by the author on 03-Aug-2016
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Dan,
Thank you for the read and review. I'm thankful for the interpretation you had. All glory to God. God bless.
Comment from MizKat
Hi Lance,
I loved your poem and always look forward to reading ones that will bring God and Jesus into them so this one was beautiful. I also liked the scripture you put up from Proverbs 27:19.
Kat
reply by the author on 03-Aug-2016
Hi Lance,
I loved your poem and always look forward to reading ones that will bring God and Jesus into them so this one was beautiful. I also liked the scripture you put up from Proverbs 27:19.
Kat
Comment Written 03-Aug-2016
reply by the author on 03-Aug-2016
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Kat,
Thank you so much. Your feedback is always so warming. God bless.
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You're very welcome. God bless you too. Kat
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written poem. Everything we do in our lives reflects our inner self where no one else but God can see. Wherever we go we reflect who we are.
reply by the author on 03-Aug-2016
A very well-written poem. Everything we do in our lives reflects our inner self where no one else but God can see. Wherever we go we reflect who we are.
Comment Written 03-Aug-2016
reply by the author on 03-Aug-2016
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Sandra. Thank you for taking the time to read and review my poem. You are correct about the reflections. I've said for many years, out of the mouth comes our heart. God bless.
Comment from BeasPeas
A very nice poem for this Picture This post. It has good flow, rhyming and content. Uplifting and encouraging. I like the alternating lines of 8 and 6. Marilyn
reply by the author on 02-Aug-2016
A very nice poem for this Picture This post. It has good flow, rhyming and content. Uplifting and encouraging. I like the alternating lines of 8 and 6. Marilyn
Comment Written 02-Aug-2016
reply by the author on 02-Aug-2016
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Marilyn,
Thank you for the wonderful review. I greatly appreciate it. God bless.
Comment from misscookie
I love the words to your poem
It is a perfect you see
For God has given you a talent to see more than green bushes and trees.
Thank you for sharing. This heartfelt poem. I hope you get a chance to read mine.
Cookie
reply by the author on 02-Aug-2016
I love the words to your poem
It is a perfect you see
For God has given you a talent to see more than green bushes and trees.
Thank you for sharing. This heartfelt poem. I hope you get a chance to read mine.
Cookie
Comment Written 02-Aug-2016
reply by the author on 02-Aug-2016
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Thank you Miss Cookie. I give God all the glory for the ability to write. God bless.
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You're very welcome, until next time.
Cookie
Comment from MelB
What a beautiful poem with very nice abab rhyme and flow. We can go astray but always come back to Him, which you summed up well.
reply by the author on 02-Aug-2016
What a beautiful poem with very nice abab rhyme and flow. We can go astray but always come back to Him, which you summed up well.
Comment Written 02-Aug-2016
reply by the author on 02-Aug-2016
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Mel. Thank you for your kind review. I greatly appreciate it. God bless.
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You're welcome. Blessings to you:)
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You're welcome. Blessings to you:)
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
I enjoyed your interpretation of the challenge group poem.
I like the way you focused on the river. I like the way you started with one perspective but later realized how things change with one's life.
Your lines flow smoothly with a great message that God is and always has been by your side.
Good job & thanks for sharing. Jan
reply by the author on 02-Aug-2016
I enjoyed your interpretation of the challenge group poem.
I like the way you focused on the river. I like the way you started with one perspective but later realized how things change with one's life.
Your lines flow smoothly with a great message that God is and always has been by your side.
Good job & thanks for sharing. Jan
Comment Written 02-Aug-2016
reply by the author on 02-Aug-2016
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Jan. Thank you for your kind words and review. I appreciate them all. God bless.
Comment from Pantygynt
These waters are so still that there is barely any distortion in the reflections seen here. Eventually this spiritual poem gets around to matching the undistorted view since the poet sees things through the undistorted eyes of God. A clever approach to the picture. Highly original,
reply by the author on 02-Aug-2016
These waters are so still that there is barely any distortion in the reflections seen here. Eventually this spiritual poem gets around to matching the undistorted view since the poet sees things through the undistorted eyes of God. A clever approach to the picture. Highly original,
Comment Written 02-Aug-2016
reply by the author on 02-Aug-2016
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Pantygynt. Thank you for the review. I greatly appreciate it. God bless.