thoughts and feelings in poetry
Viewing comments for Chapter 30 "I'm Not Stupid"poems reflecting my thoughts and feelings
6 total reviews
Comment from amber1rae
I love this. The simplicity of knowing that you are comfortable in you faith. That just goes to show people worry too much about the small things. We should all just do good, and pray for goodwill.
reply by the author on 24-Dec-2016
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I love this. The simplicity of knowing that you are comfortable in you faith. That just goes to show people worry too much about the small things. We should all just do good, and pray for goodwill.
Comment Written 12-Aug-2016
reply by the author on 24-Dec-2016
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THANK YOU FOR YOUR REVIEW,
Comment from BeasPeas
I agree with you and I'm grateful for my stupidity, too. Your poem is a well expressed affirmation of your faith. Suggest editing: After a (,) add one space. No capital when sentence is continued on the next line. Marilyn
reply by the author on 24-Dec-2016
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I agree with you and I'm grateful for my stupidity, too. Your poem is a well expressed affirmation of your faith. Suggest editing: After a (,) add one space. No capital when sentence is continued on the next line. Marilyn
Comment Written 12-Aug-2016
reply by the author on 24-Dec-2016
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Thank You for your review
Comment from Susanne M. Psyris
Very good entry into the Faith/Free Form contest. Nice rhythm and rhyme and reads quite smoothly! Really enjoyed this well-written piece you have entered. Wish you best of luck in the contest. God bless and hugs, Susanne
reply by the author on 24-Dec-2016
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Very good entry into the Faith/Free Form contest. Nice rhythm and rhyme and reads quite smoothly! Really enjoyed this well-written piece you have entered. Wish you best of luck in the contest. God bless and hugs, Susanne
Comment Written 11-Aug-2016
reply by the author on 24-Dec-2016
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Thank you
Comment from Kaydoe
Sometimes people look upon faith in Jesus Christ as a crutch. Often times people of faith are looked down upon. Some may think we're stupid but God tells us other wise in the Bible. Our hope is in the Lord, Creator of all things. The Father gave his One and only Son Jesus, to redeem the world and bring us back into a right relationship with Him. This doesn't sound stupid to me. Poem expressed nicely.
reply by the author on 24-Dec-2016
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Sometimes people look upon faith in Jesus Christ as a crutch. Often times people of faith are looked down upon. Some may think we're stupid but God tells us other wise in the Bible. Our hope is in the Lord, Creator of all things. The Father gave his One and only Son Jesus, to redeem the world and bring us back into a right relationship with Him. This doesn't sound stupid to me. Poem expressed nicely.
Comment Written 06-Aug-2016
reply by the author on 24-Dec-2016
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Thank You for your review I appreciate it.
Comment from Irish Rain
Better to believe, and be wrong....but in the meantime live a good, decent, happy life....than to NOT believe, and in the end...find out you should have....love this....blessings....
reply by the author on 24-Dec-2016
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Better to believe, and be wrong....but in the meantime live a good, decent, happy life....than to NOT believe, and in the end...find out you should have....love this....blessings....
Comment Written 01-Aug-2016
reply by the author on 24-Dec-2016
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Thank you for your review I do appreciate it
Comment from bob cullen
May I please join you in your stupidity.
I loved your poem and its message. What a pity the rest of the world remains ignorant to this simple fact
reply by the author on 24-Dec-2016
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May I please join you in your stupidity.
I loved your poem and its message. What a pity the rest of the world remains ignorant to this simple fact
Comment Written 01-Aug-2016
reply by the author on 24-Dec-2016
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Thank you for your review I appreciate it