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A little gram of happiness

A song lyric

16 total reviews 
Comment from MizKat
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Hi Ine,

You've done a wonderful job in writing this poem about you and your husband.
I enjoyed reading it all the way through and I'm happy to see that it's been recognized.

Kat

 Comment Written 03-Aug-2016


reply by the author on 04-Aug-2016
    Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a nice last part of the week.. It is not about us:)
reply by MizKat on 04-Aug-2016
    You poem was still wonderful even if it wasn't abut you and your husband. Kat
Comment from Ulla
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Hi Ine, so true what you say here in your well written song lyrics. If you give in love you will also have to receive back. In the first stanza: the you say share all = then you say share all.
I liked it a lot. All the best. Ulla:)))

 Comment Written 03-Aug-2016


reply by the author on 03-Aug-2016
    Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a great second part of the week
Comment from BeasPeas
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You have some excellent lines in your poem referencing sharing wealth and love as well as the ability to give back what is received. Many people forget that part. Good job with this. Marilyn

 Comment Written 02-Aug-2016


reply by the author on 03-Aug-2016
    Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a great second part of the week.
Comment from RoostyNester
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I loved your unique style of a song lyrics poem. Your poem gives a message of falling in love with a committed relationship. An everlasting love.

 Comment Written 02-Aug-2016


reply by the author on 03-Aug-2016
    Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a great second part of the week
Comment from ExperiencingLiphe
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I think that love does have rules. Maybe it isn't the love that has the rules but just rules you set. I mean someone can hurt you but you still love them, right? You have to set boundaries? But, yes, you're right. Great job. Will is stuck with me til the end...unless a rule gets broken. lol

 Comment Written 01-Aug-2016


reply by the author on 02-Aug-2016
    Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a lovely week.
Comment from royowen
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It's true that love should be sharing, a mutual agreement that is adhered to and given with generosity and expansiveness of heart. Of course, some will give more than others, but one should always strive with all one's might to endeavour to do one's bit. Nicely written Ine, in astute, articulate advice, spiced with description's wisdom. Beautifully delivered, well done, blessings, Roy

 Comment Written 01-Aug-2016


reply by the author on 02-Aug-2016
    Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a lovely week.
reply by royowen on 02-Aug-2016
    Most welcome
Comment from l.raven
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HI Ine, a wonderful story told my friend...when both feel true love for each other...you join together...what was yours is now his...and what was his is now yours...you are as one...both work to keep your lives happy...you are all he sees...and he is all you see...very well written sweet girl....and the perfect picture...love ya you...Linda xxoo

 Comment Written 01-Aug-2016


reply by the author on 02-Aug-2016
    Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a lovely week.
reply by l.raven on 02-Aug-2016
    your so welcome Ine...you have a lovely week too...xxoo Linda
Comment from Joan E.
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I enjoyed your happy, song lyrics and your art selection accompanying it. Your repeat of the compelling title is very effective, and I liked your "old fashioned" interpretation that "love has rules". Cheers-

 Comment Written 01-Aug-2016


reply by the author on 02-Aug-2016
    Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a lovely week.
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
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What a really lovely romantic poem, Ine, and I know you mean it too. I have read enough of your work to know how much you and your husband love each other. Till death us do part. That is how it should be. Lovely, my friend. :) Sandra xx

 Comment Written 01-Aug-2016


reply by the author on 02-Aug-2016
    Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a lovely week.
Comment from davisr (Rhonda)
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A beautiful love poem about sharing within a relationship, but sharing with rules.
Love is more important than money, but should be approached with the mind as well as the heart--at least, that's what I get out of it.

Take care,
Rhonda

 Comment Written 01-Aug-2016


reply by the author on 02-Aug-2016
    Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a lovely week.