Comment from Carolyn 'Deaton' Stephens

Excellent

Hi there,
The wind is such a mystery and a blessing to experience.
As the winds fly by we can feel the breezy cooling air
as it rushes by, back to where, no one knows.
I enjoyed the words to your short but expressive poem.
:-) Carolyn

 Comment Written 05-Aug-2016

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reply by the author on 06-Aug-2016

Hi Carolyn. Many thanks for your review and ai am glad you found my Air poem worthy of such a good rating Cheers to you Christine😃

Comment from frogbook

Excellent

A very "airy" description indeed. One could feel that chill air racing around. Good use of the prompt. Best of luck with this well written entry.

 Comment Written 02-Aug-2016

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reply by the author on 03-Aug-2016

Hi frogbook, thanks for your review for this airy poem, They are quite a challenge at times cheers for your good luck wish

Comment from TPAC

Excellent

Compelling thoughts pleasing in presented write, conveyances delighting with interests: thought-provoking views captivating to me.

 Comment Written 02-Aug-2016

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reply by the author on 02-Aug-2016

Hi TPAC. Thanks for your review for my 3-5-3. I am glad you thought it compelling and captured your attention . much appreciated Cheers Christine😀

Comment from William Ross

Excellent

Good entry on the 3.5.3 air prompt, love the cool breezes on hot summer days. This should do well, good luck and have a great day

 Comment Written 01-Aug-2016

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reply by the author on 01-Aug-2016

Hi William, Thanks so much for your review of Air just a few thoughts and ai appreciate your time to read this and your good luck message Cheers

reply by the author on 01-Aug-2016

Hi William, Thanks so much for your review of Air just a few thoughts and ai appreciate your time to read this and your good luck message Cheers

Comment from Sandra du Plessis

Excellent

A very well-written 3-5-3 air poem. We can not see the wind but we can see the effect of the wind and feel the breeze of air as it rushes by.

 Comment Written 01-Aug-2016

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reply by the author on 01-Aug-2016

Hi Sandra, Many thanks for your review and yes Air is unseen but often felt that is how i saw it for this contest Cheers

reply by the author on 01-Aug-2016

Hi Sandra, Many thanks for your review and yes Air is unseen but often felt that is how i saw it for this contest Cheers