Christine's Poems
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Comment from Irish Rain
Love this, especially the last line, 'while lying on a hill of green.' I've heard there is actual physical healing drawn from walking barefoot...the green is good for us. Your poem is beautiful, and so peaceful, blessings....
reply by the author on 06-Aug-2016
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Love this, especially the last line, 'while lying on a hill of green.' I've heard there is actual physical healing drawn from walking barefoot...the green is good for us. Your poem is beautiful, and so peaceful, blessings....
Comment Written 03-Aug-2016
reply by the author on 06-Aug-2016
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Hi Irish Rain, Yes I have heard that too amd thanks you so much for your time to reead and review my poem. Your words are very apppreciated Cheers to you for a lovely day Christine😃
Comment from LanceHill
Another great entry for this challenge. You have allowed the reader the ability to feel the freedom described. I enjoyed the manner in which you bring the reader into the picture. Thanks for sharing. God bless.
reply by the author on 03-Aug-2016
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Another great entry for this challenge. You have allowed the reader the ability to feel the freedom described. I enjoyed the manner in which you bring the reader into the picture. Thanks for sharing. God bless.
Comment Written 03-Aug-2016
reply by the author on 03-Aug-2016
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Hi Lance Thanks for your lovely review and I also enjoyed your poem for this challenge. They are such fun to do and brings out some great minds Cheers for a great day Christine
Comment from danpald
How sweet the feel of the poem
Flowing with such warmth
For the scene does unfold
With the smell of grass so close
To feel the sweet grass on the hill
To watch the clouds forming still
To long for the quite of the place
Filled with tranquil beauty and grace
reply by the author on 03-Aug-2016
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How sweet the feel of the poem
Flowing with such warmth
For the scene does unfold
With the smell of grass so close
To feel the sweet grass on the hill
To watch the clouds forming still
To long for the quite of the place
Filled with tranquil beauty and grace
Comment Written 03-Aug-2016
reply by the author on 03-Aug-2016
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hi Danpald what a lovely review and thanks for reading my poem for this image. i look forward to you poetic reviews a lovey poem in itself cheers Christine
Comment from PoemsOfDD
Christine, this is a lovely poem you have written for the picture challenge. It whisked me away to a calm and tranquil place - I was laying on the grass too feeling immersed in green and rejuvenated. I love the third stanza the most. I found this to be a most refreshing poem indeed. I hope my short picture challenge poem refreshes you somewhat too. Warm regards ~DD
reply by the author on 03-Aug-2016
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Christine, this is a lovely poem you have written for the picture challenge. It whisked me away to a calm and tranquil place - I was laying on the grass too feeling immersed in green and rejuvenated. I love the third stanza the most. I found this to be a most refreshing poem indeed. I hope my short picture challenge poem refreshes you somewhat too. Warm regards ~DD
Comment Written 03-Aug-2016
reply by the author on 03-Aug-2016
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hi DD, glad you had a refresh and relax with my poem . i thank you for your read and post back ? i look forward to catching up with the others, have been busy working but day off today so i will spend time reading the others Cheers Christine
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Christine, happy reviewing to you but remember to relax on your day off :-)~DD
Comment from BeasPeas
This is a lovely poem, Christine. I particularly enjoyed the very first stanza. I remember as a kid lying on the grass with arms outstretched looking at the clouds. Brought back a nice memory. Marilyn
reply by the author on 03-Aug-2016
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This is a lovely poem, Christine. I particularly enjoyed the very first stanza. I remember as a kid lying on the grass with arms outstretched looking at the clouds. Brought back a nice memory. Marilyn
Comment Written 02-Aug-2016
reply by the author on 03-Aug-2016
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Hi Marilyn, yes I think we all did a bit of laying back cloud watching still do given the chance LOL. what fun to write these challenge poems an I look forward to caychin up with the others. Thanks again Cheers Christine😀
Comment from dannielleduran
Your use of imagery to bring out the meaning of your poem is excellent. The poem flows nicely and brings out a peaceful feeling. You did well in writing your poem.
reply by the author on 03-Aug-2016
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Your use of imagery to bring out the meaning of your poem is excellent. The poem flows nicely and brings out a peaceful feeling. You did well in writing your poem.
Comment Written 02-Aug-2016
reply by the author on 03-Aug-2016
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Hi danielle Thank you for your lovely revie and I am glad you felt my theme came through. Much appreciatin of you time to read this poem and I send you many Cheeers Christine😃
Comment from heyjude
Chrissy, nicely done. You did a good job of capturing this picture
this challenge. The scene you described does sound tranquil.
Oh, to lay in a field of green and watch the clouds.
reply by the author on 03-Aug-2016
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Chrissy, nicely done. You did a good job of capturing this picture
this challenge. The scene you described does sound tranquil.
Oh, to lay in a field of green and watch the clouds.
Comment Written 02-Aug-2016
reply by the author on 03-Aug-2016
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Hi heyjude, yes what a pleasant experience to just layout and feel the peace amd tranquility. Thanks so much for reading this and have a great day Cheers Christine😃
Comment from EricBrady
A beautiful depiction of a relaxing day. Taking time to rejuvenate and replenish the soul. The peace and serenity that your words have invoked are but a dream that I can only imagine. I'm at the grindstone with vacation out of reach, but for a moment you have tempted my soul. Beautiful and vivid descriptions of this picture. I loved how your words seemed to cascade down the page. Best wishes in the challenge.
reply by the author on 03-Aug-2016
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A beautiful depiction of a relaxing day. Taking time to rejuvenate and replenish the soul. The peace and serenity that your words have invoked are but a dream that I can only imagine. I'm at the grindstone with vacation out of reach, but for a moment you have tempted my soul. Beautiful and vivid descriptions of this picture. I loved how your words seemed to cascade down the page. Best wishes in the challenge.
Comment Written 02-Aug-2016
reply by the author on 03-Aug-2016
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Hi Eric, Sorry it has taken me a while to respond but I have also been flat out working and today I have a day off so I can now spend some time on here to answer myj reviews. Thank you very much for your lovely words for my poem and I appreciate you time to do so. These challenges arecalways fun to do and they are many and varied. Have a great day and get some rest Cheers Christine😃
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written poem. The green fields of the picture can carry us away on a special trip of dreaming. This is a close reflection of what heaven might be look alike.
reply by the author on 03-Aug-2016
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A very well-written poem. The green fields of the picture can carry us away on a special trip of dreaming. This is a close reflection of what heaven might be look alike.
Comment Written 02-Aug-2016
reply by the author on 03-Aug-2016
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Hi Sandra, Much appreciation for your review and I am pleased your thought it well written. I do try and a bit of an old fashioned lover of rhyming verse and I mist keep an eye out for a green hill to relax upon. Cheers again for your lovely support Christine😃😃
Comment from Carolyn 'Deaton' Stephens
What an absolutely wonderful take on the picture. I so appreciate the words you have chosen.
The last 2 lines are a fitting wrap.
*No greater gift I could not find as captured memory in my mind
*A glimpse of heaven I have seen, while lying on the hill of green.
Lovely, thank you for sharing
:-) Carolyn
reply by the author on 03-Aug-2016
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What an absolutely wonderful take on the picture. I so appreciate the words you have chosen.
The last 2 lines are a fitting wrap.
*No greater gift I could not find as captured memory in my mind
*A glimpse of heaven I have seen, while lying on the hill of green.
Lovely, thank you for sharing
:-) Carolyn
Comment Written 02-Aug-2016
reply by the author on 03-Aug-2016
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Hi Carolyn, how lovely to say that about my poem for this challenge and Thank you so much for reading and giving me feedback . I am pleased you found my final 2 lines a wrap for this and I had hoped my readers would have a sense of this so I do appreciate your comments A big Cheers to your Christine😃