Comment from rama devi

Excellent

Congrats on placing second the contest. I think this is a very unique and creative response to the contest prompt. Ghostly whispers. Well said, dear Gretchen! Fine alliteration of W, C, M and G.

I suggest not using caps on all liens (optional).

Also suggest a dash after line two (also optional).

Congrats, again!

Warmly, rd

 Comment Written 15-Aug-2016

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reply by the author on 16-Aug-2016

Thank you very much for your wonderful review and the helpful critique. Gretchen

reply by rama devi on 16-Aug-2016

My pleasure, Gretchen. Warm Smiles, rd

Comment from BeasPeas

Excellent

Awwww! A sad one. I know those ghostly voices, though. We just can't get a handle on what they are saying. Nicely composed even without an image to accompany. Marilyn

 Comment Written 31-Jul-2016

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reply by the author on 03-Aug-2016

Thank you so much for your wonderful review. Gretchen

Comment from Bill Schott

Excellent

This 5-7-5 about writers block, Evasive, seems to suggest that the muse is near death or communicating from the other side. Might need Ghost Hunters to squeeze out a plot.

 Comment Written 31-Jul-2016

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reply by the author on 03-Aug-2016

Lol. Thank you for your humorous review. Gretchen

Comment from Jannypan (Jan)

Excellent

You did a great job with the prompt. Good job with the syllable count. Your few words tell a good story.

Best wishes in the contest. Thanks for sharing. Jan

 Comment Written 30-Jul-2016

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reply by the author on 03-Aug-2016

Thank you so much for your wonderful review. Gretchen

Comment from Pam (respa)

Excellent

-Good entry for contest.
-Correct format.
-Good imagery in line one
with "Ghostly whispers."
-It makes sense you wouldn't
understand these words.
-I like the last line very much.
-Good luck!

 Comment Written 30-Jul-2016

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reply by the author on 03-Aug-2016

Thank you so much for your wonderful review. Gretchen

reply by Pam (respa) on 03-Aug-2016

You are very welcome.