Comment from Bill Schott

Excellent

This one-six-one, Too Many Bubbles, has fun with the few words that work along with a cute shot to put us in a playful bath. Nice.

 Comment Written 30-Jul-2016

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reply by the author on 31-Jul-2016

oh how I remember that day!!! hehehe fun times...thanks for reading Bill!!! always appreciate your kind words! :-)

Comment from Teri7

Excellent

This is just too cute. love the wording and the picture. Makes me think of my two year old grandson, Greyson. He loves bubbles. He goes around saying bubbles all the time. Good luck. Teri

 Comment Written 30-Jul-2016

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reply by the author on 30-Jul-2016

Thanks Teri!...those girls had fun that day for sure!!!

Comment from RYME4U

Excellent

Cute picture, well described. The 1-6-1 rhymes are good. Your poem has painted a really cute word picture, This should do well in contest

 Comment Written 30-Jul-2016

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reply by the author on 30-Jul-2016

Thank you so much!!! have a great day!!!

Comment from Heather Knight

Excellent

This is a lot of fun. It brought a smile to my face. And I have to say the picture is perfect. Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 29-Jul-2016

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reply by the author on 29-Jul-2016

Thank You!!! much appreciated!!!

Comment from fastdigits

Excellent

You have managed to tell an
adorable tale in but three lines and
eight syllables that brings a smile
on a dark rainy day.
Well done and good luck

 Comment Written 29-Jul-2016

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reply by the author on 29-Jul-2016

haha...gloomy day here too! glad you liked it!!