Banana Split
Yummy dessert23 total reviews
Comment from rspoet
This is perfect for the contest
and for dessert
I used to eat them long ago
but things change as you grow older
Now a sundae about the best I can do
but they taste great too!
Nicely rhymed and metered poem
with excellent picture
Well done
Good luck in the contest and enjoy the split
reply by the author on 30-Jul-2016
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This is perfect for the contest
and for dessert
I used to eat them long ago
but things change as you grow older
Now a sundae about the best I can do
but they taste great too!
Nicely rhymed and metered poem
with excellent picture
Well done
Good luck in the contest and enjoy the split
Comment Written 29-Jul-2016
reply by the author on 30-Jul-2016
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getting older..i know what ya mean! but, i had a caramel sundae last night!! oh well hehehehe..thanks for reading and the great review!! much appreciated!!!!
Comment from Janet Foor
Yummmmmy....I will have to have one of those banana splits soon.
Nice rhyme and definitely a delicious dessert for this writing prompt.
Well done and good luck in the contest.
Blessings
Janet
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2016
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Yummmmmy....I will have to have one of those banana splits soon.
Nice rhyme and definitely a delicious dessert for this writing prompt.
Well done and good luck in the contest.
Blessings
Janet
Comment Written 29-Jul-2016
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2016
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Awe thanks so much!!!! glad you enjoyed it!!!
Comment from Dean Kuch
You had me allllll the way up to the whip cream, Anonymous Poet.
The stuff makes me gag, just can't stand the consistency of it in my mouth.
YUCK!
Still, to each his or her own, and your poem is very well rhymed, very funny, and reads very smoothly when read aloud.
You also manage to make a banana split sound scrumptious, although I doubt they need much help, LOL.
Good writing, and best of luck to you in the contest.
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2016
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You had me allllll the way up to the whip cream, Anonymous Poet.
The stuff makes me gag, just can't stand the consistency of it in my mouth.
YUCK!
Still, to each his or her own, and your poem is very well rhymed, very funny, and reads very smoothly when read aloud.
You also manage to make a banana split sound scrumptious, although I doubt they need much help, LOL.
Good writing, and best of luck to you in the contest.
Comment Written 29-Jul-2016
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2016
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What???? Don't all men love whip cream???? I 'm pretty sure yes...lol hehehe but thanks for reading and the wonderful review..Much appreciated!!!! Where is the cute little Dean guy moving across the page....that signature is kinda boring :-p
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written poem about a delicious dessert. Most of us enjoy a sweet treat from time to time. It is not always good for the figure or the health, but always delicious.
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2016
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A very well-written poem about a delicious dessert. Most of us enjoy a sweet treat from time to time. It is not always good for the figure or the health, but always delicious.
Comment Written 29-Jul-2016
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2016
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Thanks Sandra!! this was a fun contest!!!
Comment from Bollie
Way to go!!! This is a very clever and creative poem that made me smile. The imagery combined with the perfect picture makes this poem come alive. The rhyming is great and unforced and the syllable count is consistent which makes the poem flow nicely. This is a really good poem. Best of luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2016
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Way to go!!! This is a very clever and creative poem that made me smile. The imagery combined with the perfect picture makes this poem come alive. The rhyming is great and unforced and the syllable count is consistent which makes the poem flow nicely. This is a really good poem. Best of luck in the contest.
Comment Written 29-Jul-2016
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2016
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thanks Bobby!! means a lot..cause you be a meter master....and meter and I have a love/hate relationship going at the moment!
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You'te very welcome, my friend.
Have a wonderful day.
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You'te very welcome, my friend.
Have a wonderful day.
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You'te very welcome, my friend.
Have a wonderful day.
Comment from heyjude
Mystery author, this was a fun read for the delicious desserts writing
prompt. All that ooey gooey sauce sounds scrumptious. You even
gave me a laugh. Good luck in the contest. Good job.
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2016
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Mystery author, this was a fun read for the delicious desserts writing
prompt. All that ooey gooey sauce sounds scrumptious. You even
gave me a laugh. Good luck in the contest. Good job.
Comment Written 29-Jul-2016
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2016
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Gotta love banana splits!!! good stuff!!! thanks for reading!!
Comment from William Ross
Very good, nicely done on the banana split by far my favorite ice cream snack. Great rhyming, rhythm and flow when read. good luck on this and have a great day
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2016
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Very good, nicely done on the banana split by far my favorite ice cream snack. Great rhyming, rhythm and flow when read. good luck on this and have a great day
Comment Written 29-Jul-2016
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2016
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Thanks Bill!! I had fun with this one..
Comment from joannakruk
Hehe a fun piece one leaving me craving for a banana split even though I don't even like bananas! A great flow that describes all the best bits of this appetizing dessert.
The picture is spectacular haha.
Well done
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2016
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Hehe a fun piece one leaving me craving for a banana split even though I don't even like bananas! A great flow that describes all the best bits of this appetizing dessert.
The picture is spectacular haha.
Well done
Comment Written 29-Jul-2016
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2016
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Go and get one!!! hehe sooooo good!!! thanks for reading!!! much appreciated!!
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
I enjoyed your great poem about the delicious dessert for the contest. Your picture is perfect. You did a super job with the rhyme & smooth flow of lines. The story told is funny & so true of those that really love whatever they love.
Good job & best wishes in the contest.
haha I hate bananas. But your poem is great ! Jan
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2016
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I enjoyed your great poem about the delicious dessert for the contest. Your picture is perfect. You did a super job with the rhyme & smooth flow of lines. The story told is funny & so true of those that really love whatever they love.
Good job & best wishes in the contest.
haha I hate bananas. But your poem is great ! Jan
Comment Written 28-Jul-2016
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2016
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Thank you thank you!!! I had fun with this!!!
Comment from RoostyNester
Can I have a bite of your banana split? It does look yummy! Very funny Delicious Dessert poem! EVERYONE can relate to this! lol I liked your poem.
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2016
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Can I have a bite of your banana split? It does look yummy! Very funny Delicious Dessert poem! EVERYONE can relate to this! lol I liked your poem.
Comment Written 28-Jul-2016
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2016
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No you can't..sorry...you will need to get your own!! but i'll go with you hehehe
