Windows To The Past
Viewing comments for Chapter 17 "The old Cowpoke"Poems about the old West.
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Comment from Janel Mock
This made my day! I am usually drawn to darker poetry and poems that make me feel raw deep emotion. But this is actually both humorous and deep in my opinion! I enjoyed reading it! Thank you for sharing! ~Janel
reply by the author on 04-Jun-2023
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This made my day! I am usually drawn to darker poetry and poems that make me feel raw deep emotion. But this is actually both humorous and deep in my opinion! I enjoyed reading it! Thank you for sharing! ~Janel
Comment Written 04-Jun-2023
reply by the author on 04-Jun-2023
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Thank you for the lovely feedback Janet. I am so happy youu enjoed the poem. Have a nice day! Nancy:)xxx
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Thank you for the lovely feedback Janel. I am so happy you enjoyed the poem. Have a nice day! Nancy:)xxx
Comment from country ranch writer
Howdy, I heard the cowpoke won't go to heaven with out his horse.
That the way those ole cow pokes sure take care of their horse Berger than they do rpthemselves.
reply by the author on 04-Jun-2023
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Howdy, I heard the cowpoke won't go to heaven with out his horse.
That the way those ole cow pokes sure take care of their horse Berger than they do rpthemselves.
Comment Written 03-Jun-2023
reply by the author on 04-Jun-2023
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Thank you for the fun review Barb, We do love our horses, Right? Have a great day! Nancy:) xxxx
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Horses are smarter than people give them credit for and they are very good listeners.
Comment from judiverse
What a poignant story of the old cowpoke. He feels like he's at his trail's end and doesn't have very much to show for his life. His saddle and his horse are old, too. He hopes to find peace at the end of the trail. Love the observation in the last line that until horses can fly he can't go. You did a great job with the rhyme in this. A lovely presentation. judi
reply by the author on 03-Jun-2023
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What a poignant story of the old cowpoke. He feels like he's at his trail's end and doesn't have very much to show for his life. His saddle and his horse are old, too. He hopes to find peace at the end of the trail. Love the observation in the last line that until horses can fly he can't go. You did a great job with the rhyme in this. A lovely presentation. judi
Comment Written 02-Jun-2023
reply by the author on 03-Jun-2023
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Thank you for the lovely review and more than generous six, Judi. Have a wonderful day. Nancy :) xxxxx
Comment from Michele Harber
I've always loved how well you use dialect to create a character. I fully believe your cowpoke is part of the old west. Your story is sad but sweet and, unless that horse is named Pegasus, I think your cowboy has a few good years left. (He's already made it from 2016 to 2023!)
reply by the author on 03-Jun-2023
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I've always loved how well you use dialect to create a character. I fully believe your cowpoke is part of the old west. Your story is sad but sweet and, unless that horse is named Pegasus, I think your cowboy has a few good years left. (He's already made it from 2016 to 2023!)
Comment Written 02-Jun-2023
reply by the author on 03-Jun-2023
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Sometimes on the right horse it feels like you are flying. Thanks for the great review and stars Michele. Have a nice day. Nancy:) xxxx
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You're very welcome, Nancy.
I'm afraid my only experience with horses is on slow trots at a dude ranch, but I've always enjoyed them, and found the horses such beautiful animals.
Enjoy the rest of the week.
Comment from Mr. Green
Now this poem tells a story. The old cowpoke knows he's close to the end of the trail. A long trail it's been too. You know that, because he's out a poke. Mosta his bones, done been broken, his saddle is worn thin with age and his companions back is showing some sway. But just like the cowpokes of old, he just anta' gonna' go, without his horse, so he's prepared to wait a little longer. Beautifully written, Nancy. Thank you for sharing. Larry
reply by the author on 03-Jun-2023
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Now this poem tells a story. The old cowpoke knows he's close to the end of the trail. A long trail it's been too. You know that, because he's out a poke. Mosta his bones, done been broken, his saddle is worn thin with age and his companions back is showing some sway. But just like the cowpokes of old, he just anta' gonna' go, without his horse, so he's prepared to wait a little longer. Beautifully written, Nancy. Thank you for sharing. Larry
Comment Written 02-Jun-2023
reply by the author on 03-Jun-2023
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This is a fun review Larry. Thank you so much for brightening up my cloudy day! Have a wonderful day and write on! Nancy:) xx
Comment from Heather Knight
I was about not to read this because I've never liked westerns, but I'm really glad I did.
I love your sense of humour and you rhyme very naturally. I wish I could do that.
There's only one thing I don't get. When you say poke, are you referring to the bag where he carries his possessions?
Thanks for sharing. Very much enjoyed.
reply by the author on 02-Jun-2023
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I was about not to read this because I've never liked westerns, but I'm really glad I did.
I love your sense of humour and you rhyme very naturally. I wish I could do that.
There's only one thing I don't get. When you say poke, are you referring to the bag where he carries his possessions?
Thanks for sharing. Very much enjoyed.
Comment Written 01-Jun-2023
reply by the author on 02-Jun-2023
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Yes, A poke is where the cowboy keeps all his possessions. Thanks for the review Heather. Have a nice day. Nancy:)xxx
Comment from w.j.debi
It sounds like the end of the trail is coming up for both a hardworking cowboy and his horse. Their way of life is a hard one, but they obviously both love it. Excellent closing. It made me chuckle.
reply by the author on 02-Jun-2023
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It sounds like the end of the trail is coming up for both a hardworking cowboy and his horse. Their way of life is a hard one, but they obviously both love it. Excellent closing. It made me chuckle.
Comment Written 01-Jun-2023
reply by the author on 02-Jun-2023
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Thank you very much for the review and stars Debi. Have a lovely day. Nancy:)xxx
Comment from Ginda Simpson
What a delightful read this is. You really do capture the spirit of this old cowboy and his horse, and you do it with simple description and gentle humor. It is easy to imagine this scene and would be nice to spend some time in this fellow's company. I wish I still had a six to give you.
reply by the author on 02-Jun-2023
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What a delightful read this is. You really do capture the spirit of this old cowboy and his horse, and you do it with simple description and gentle humor. It is easy to imagine this scene and would be nice to spend some time in this fellow's company. I wish I still had a six to give you.
Comment Written 01-Jun-2023
reply by the author on 02-Jun-2023
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It was a delight to read your review, Ginda. Thank you and thank you for the rating. There is nothing wrong with the five. Have a nice day. Nancy😀 xxx
Comment from Carol Clark2
This is a fun poem, Nancy. Thanks for explaining the cowboy's poke -- I didn't really know what it was. Thanks for re-posting your humorous take on the cowboy's life. Blessings. Carol
reply by the author on 02-Jun-2023
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This is a fun poem, Nancy. Thanks for explaining the cowboy's poke -- I didn't really know what it was. Thanks for re-posting your humorous take on the cowboy's life. Blessings. Carol
Comment Written 01-Jun-2023
reply by the author on 02-Jun-2023
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I thought there might be a need to explain the poke to some city folk. LOL I am happy you enjoyed the post. Thanks for the review. Have a great day! Nancy:)xxx
Comment from barbara.wilkey
I am sorry I missed this the first time around. I am so happy that your posted it again so I was able to read it. I had to smile at the broken bones. My uncle was a bull rider on the rodeo circuit. He had broken so many bones that during WWII, they wouldn't allow him to enlist.
reply by the author on 02-Jun-2023
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I am sorry I missed this the first time around. I am so happy that your posted it again so I was able to read it. I had to smile at the broken bones. My uncle was a bull rider on the rodeo circuit. He had broken so many bones that during WWII, they wouldn't allow him to enlist.
Comment Written 01-Jun-2023
reply by the author on 02-Jun-2023
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I would say he might have dodged a bullet, wouldn't you? Thanks for the review and stars Barbara. Have a nice day! Nancy:) xxx
