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My thoughts on Life
3 total reviews
Comment from
essence56
kEEP ON WRITING, YOUR WORK IS SO GREAT. i LOVE HOW THIS SYORY IS FLOWING AND IT IS SO SMOOTH. DESCRIPTIVE AND SO REAL THAT I WOULD BELIEVE THIS TO BE A VERY EXCELLENT NON+FICTION.
Comment Written 25-Jul-2016
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2016
Thanks for the kind thoughts on this amazing poem Miss essence.
I,find strenth,(though my writings)
To move forward...
RICKY1024
Comment from
Phyllis Stewart
How tragic to lose your only son. These snippets from his life are an effective way to show his life and yours when he was with you. I'm curious about the three people alive bec of him. ?
Comment Written 25-Jul-2016
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2016
Thanks for the kind thoughts on this amazing poem Phyliss.
RICKY1024
Comment from
Susanne M. Psyris
Ricky1024, wow. What a read! I could barely stand your pain and misery. I don't think I could cope...really. This is so sad and soul-bearing. So many lovely lines and very emotive. Great job. God bless and hugs, Susanne
Comment Written 25-Jul-2016
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2016
Thanks for the kind thoughts on this amazing poem Susanne.
As always,
RICKY1024
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