bluebonnets arrival
contest entry14 total reviews
Comment from rama devi
Superb word economy and what a fine paired alliteration of B and PO ()cousin sounds) plus superb consonance of V and L and S. I have only one suggestion--to add an apostrophe on: bluebonnet's arrival
Prismatic and praise...nice echo of multiple phonetics.
Beautiful picture!
Floral ovation is an outstanding satori! Nice personification too.
Great entry for the contest.
Good Luck
Warm Smiles, rd
reply by the author on 30-Jul-2016
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Superb word economy and what a fine paired alliteration of B and PO ()cousin sounds) plus superb consonance of V and L and S. I have only one suggestion--to add an apostrophe on: bluebonnet's arrival
Prismatic and praise...nice echo of multiple phonetics.
Beautiful picture!
Floral ovation is an outstanding satori! Nice personification too.
Great entry for the contest.
Good Luck
Warm Smiles, rd
Comment Written 29-Jul-2016
reply by the author on 30-Jul-2016
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Thank you Rama devi for the awesome review my friend. I will add the apostrophe for sure. They tend to allude me at times lol.
God bless!
Steve
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God bless! Thanks for your kind and gracious reply. :-)
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My pleasure!
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My pleasure!
Comment from LanceHill
Very good cuz. The picture is beautiful. The bluebonnet S appear as a softly flowing river. Hope your day is as bright as this arrangement. Have a great one. God bless.
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2016
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Very good cuz. The picture is beautiful. The bluebonnet S appear as a softly flowing river. Hope your day is as bright as this arrangement. Have a great one. God bless.
Comment Written 26-Jul-2016
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2016
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Thank you Lance! Love this style and the bluebonnets each year.
God bless cuz!
Steve
Comment from LateBloomer
Hello Neonewman, Ohhh, the bluebonnets, forever loyal and true ... Man could take a lesson from nature. I love how the surrounding bouquet are welcoming the bluebonnets - lovely imagery. I especially like:
"floral ovation"
Beautifully, yet simply stated - very nice. As this is a contest entry, I wish you good luck. Keep the blue waters flowing. LateBloomer
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2016
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Hello Neonewman, Ohhh, the bluebonnets, forever loyal and true ... Man could take a lesson from nature. I love how the surrounding bouquet are welcoming the bluebonnets - lovely imagery. I especially like:
"floral ovation"
Beautifully, yet simply stated - very nice. As this is a contest entry, I wish you good luck. Keep the blue waters flowing. LateBloomer
Comment Written 26-Jul-2016
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2016
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Thank you LateBloomer for the awesome review. Man could definitely take a lesson from nature my friend.
God bless!
Steve
Comment from l.raven
hi Neonewman, what a stunning picture...and your poem makes the flowers beautiful...so very nicely written...I would love to have been the one to take this picture...luff Linda xxoo
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2016
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hi Neonewman, what a stunning picture...and your poem makes the flowers beautiful...so very nicely written...I would love to have been the one to take this picture...luff Linda xxoo
Comment Written 25-Jul-2016
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2016
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Me too Linda! Thank you for the awesome review.
God bless!
Steve
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you are so welcome Steve...God Bless you as well my friend...xxoo Linda
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written poem about flower gardens. It is always a pleasure to walk through a beautiful flower garden that is well kept.
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2016
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A very well-written poem about flower gardens. It is always a pleasure to walk through a beautiful flower garden that is well kept.
Comment Written 25-Jul-2016
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2016
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Thank you Sandra for the awesome review. I love the first of April when the bluebonnets flood the countryside.
God bless!
Steve
Comment from Unspoken94
An excellent 5-7-5 with some choice phrases:
Prismatic and ovation are what make this such
a good piece. I will be voting for this one. -Bill
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2016
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An excellent 5-7-5 with some choice phrases:
Prismatic and ovation are what make this such
a good piece. I will be voting for this one. -Bill
Comment Written 25-Jul-2016
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2016
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Thank you for the awesome review Bill and for the support of your vote.
God bless
Steve
Comment from TPAC
Indeed a great time of season, nature illustrating changes and progression of events: all appealing thoughts. The writer selected "prismatic" keys all contained factors.
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2016
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Indeed a great time of season, nature illustrating changes and progression of events: all appealing thoughts. The writer selected "prismatic" keys all contained factors.
Comment Written 25-Jul-2016
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2016
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Thank you for the awesome review TPAC, I enjoy the colorful seasons.
God bless!
Steve
Comment from Pantygynt
Prismatic set me wondering until I remembered how a prism bends the light and sets it up in its component parts, the rainbow. Some garden in the artwork, some gardener in the garden. This I think would be a scene long gone, reminiscent of March April rather than July August. Would this be Texas in bloom? Surprising what one can learn on FanStory.
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2016
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Prismatic set me wondering until I remembered how a prism bends the light and sets it up in its component parts, the rainbow. Some garden in the artwork, some gardener in the garden. This I think would be a scene long gone, reminiscent of March April rather than July August. Would this be Texas in bloom? Surprising what one can learn on FanStory.
Comment Written 25-Jul-2016
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2016
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Thank you Pantygynt for the excellent review. They do actually bloom around April and May, sometimes(if the winter was light)they will bloom as early as February. This is not the time of the year for anything to grow around here with these triple digit temps.
God bless!
Steve
Comment from Ric Myworld
Wow, what a beautiful picture you've used to accent your fine poem. They make an enjoyable combination of picture and words. Great job. :-)
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2016
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Wow, what a beautiful picture you've used to accent your fine poem. They make an enjoyable combination of picture and words. Great job. :-)
Comment Written 25-Jul-2016
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2016
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Thank you Ric, I was happy to find the pic on line.
God bless!
Steve
Comment from RoostyNester
Very nice poem about God's bouquet of flowers. Very good 5-7-5 poem with the bluebonnets to bring out more beauty for the garden of flowers. I liked it.
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2016
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Very nice poem about God's bouquet of flowers. Very good 5-7-5 poem with the bluebonnets to bring out more beauty for the garden of flowers. I liked it.
Comment Written 25-Jul-2016
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2016
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Thank you RoostyNester for another wonderful review.
God bless!
Steve
