City streets
6 word poem19 total reviews
Comment from Janet Foor
You said a great deal in those six words. Vivid imagery that is so real in today's news.
Well done and good luck in the contest.
Blessings
Janet
reply by the author on 22-Aug-2016
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You said a great deal in those six words. Vivid imagery that is so real in today's news.
Well done and good luck in the contest.
Blessings
Janet
Comment Written 26-Jul-2016
reply by the author on 22-Aug-2016
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Thanks for a great review zanya
Comment from Bill O'Bier
You've written a great little poem. Each word is loaded. Thanks for sharing this well composed piece.
Wishing you all the best...
Bill
reply by the author on 22-Aug-2016
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You've written a great little poem. Each word is loaded. Thanks for sharing this well composed piece.
Wishing you all the best...
Bill
Comment Written 26-Jul-2016
reply by the author on 22-Aug-2016
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And thanks for reading and a superb review zanya
Comment from Irish Rain
I love the poem and picture. I'm afraid I don't follow the news very much. Was this a terrorist attack? If so, a real shame.....good luck in this contest, blessings....
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I love the poem and picture. I'm afraid I don't follow the news very much. Was this a terrorist attack? If so, a real shame.....good luck in this contest, blessings....
Comment Written 26-Jul-2016
Comment from William Ross
yes, very good the streets are todays war zones, good job on the 6 line poem, goo luck on this should do well. have a good day
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2016
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yes, very good the streets are todays war zones, good job on the 6 line poem, goo luck on this should do well. have a good day
Comment Written 26-Jul-2016
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2016
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And thank you for reading & reviewing zanya
Comment from Bobbi22
Your descriptive choice of words creates an excellent six-word poem to describe the bloody scene after the Paris attacks. Very well written. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2016
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Your descriptive choice of words creates an excellent six-word poem to describe the bloody scene after the Paris attacks. Very well written. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 25-Jul-2016
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2016
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Thank you for reading & review zanya
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Thanks for reading and the review zanya
Comment from mvbrooks
Very interesting use of this picture as one glances at the picture when scrolling to the text and upon first glance, the "red outlined building" seems merely colorful.
The brief words are powerful on their own--and even more memorable when the image's crimson is transformed from "paint" to "blood."
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Very interesting use of this picture as one glances at the picture when scrolling to the text and upon first glance, the "red outlined building" seems merely colorful.
The brief words are powerful on their own--and even more memorable when the image's crimson is transformed from "paint" to "blood."
Comment Written 25-Jul-2016
Comment from Pantygynt
A succinct but appropriate comment to yet more horrendous news. Pity the photographer didn't wait for a red man on the traffic light. The green kind of sends the wrong message really.
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2016
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A succinct but appropriate comment to yet more horrendous news. Pity the photographer didn't wait for a red man on the traffic light. The green kind of sends the wrong message really.
Comment Written 25-Jul-2016
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2016
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Thanks for reading & review zanya
Comment from Dean Kuch
Yeah, played out live for all the world to see, too, on television news channels like FOX News, CNN, and MSNBC. Protesters screaming at the top of their lungs for the senseless murder of police officers--the very individuals sworn to serve and protect us.
Terrorist attacks, mass killings, bomb blasts shredding the lives of innocents...
Now THAT'S what I call entertainment!
Best of luck to you in the contest...
~Dean
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2016
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Yeah, played out live for all the world to see, too, on television news channels like FOX News, CNN, and MSNBC. Protesters screaming at the top of their lungs for the senseless murder of police officers--the very individuals sworn to serve and protect us.
Terrorist attacks, mass killings, bomb blasts shredding the lives of innocents...
Now THAT'S what I call entertainment!
Best of luck to you in the contest...
~Dean
Comment Written 25-Jul-2016
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2016
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Yes our world seems to be on the edge of craziness ! Thanks for reading & review zanya
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Anytime, Zanya. :)
Comment from kathleenspalding
Powerful, very sad but true poem with six well chosen words. Excellent use of artwork. I don't see anything that needs correcting. Thank you for writing and sharing.
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2016
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Powerful, very sad but true poem with six well chosen words. Excellent use of artwork. I don't see anything that needs correcting. Thank you for writing and sharing.
Comment Written 24-Jul-2016
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2016
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And thank you for reading & review zanya
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You're welcome.
Comment from lancellot
Hmm, Not sure I understand this one. Is it speaking about he violence that is happening in major cities? Does crimson refer to blood being spilled, and a war on the streets?
Interesting.
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2016
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Hmm, Not sure I understand this one. Is it speaking about he violence that is happening in major cities? Does crimson refer to blood being spilled, and a war on the streets?
Interesting.
Comment Written 24-Jul-2016
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2016
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Thank you for reading zanya