Poems By AnnieDawn
Viewing comments for Chapter 43 "I Write Because"My book of poems and stories
17 total reviews
Comment from Joan E.
Thank you for sharing your reflections about why you write. I enjoyed your rhymed quatrains and am glad to hear that writing allows you to open yourself up and find "release". Cheers- Joan
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2016
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Thank you for sharing your reflections about why you write. I enjoyed your rhymed quatrains and am glad to hear that writing allows you to open yourself up and find "release". Cheers- Joan
Comment Written 23-Jul-2016
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2016
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I was surprised at how many were able to relate to this poem which made me very happy. Thanks for your review. Have a great day.
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Yes, many of us find solace in writing. Smiles- Joan
Comment from artisart4u
That's writing alright. Picking a theme and then narrowing it down when you
have so much to say can be hard.
your poem rhymes well and it gives a person an understanding of why someone
writes.
Congratulations on your recognized status.
Good luck with your poem.
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2016
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That's writing alright. Picking a theme and then narrowing it down when you
have so much to say can be hard.
your poem rhymes well and it gives a person an understanding of why someone
writes.
Congratulations on your recognized status.
Good luck with your poem.
Comment Written 23-Jul-2016
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2016
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I am so pleased that you like it. I am surprised at the responses I have been receiving as so many write the same way. Thank you for your review and kind words. Have a great weekend.
Comment from Tes1968
Annie, I loved your poem. It really evokes the reader's emotion. It had a nice steady flow that captivated me. Thanks for adding another fine poem to your collection.
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2016
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Annie, I loved your poem. It really evokes the reader's emotion. It had a nice steady flow that captivated me. Thanks for adding another fine poem to your collection.
Comment Written 23-Jul-2016
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2016
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I appreciate your review and also the stars. It is amazing to me what makes the juices flow. I am so in awe of the multitude of people who have the same feelings when writing. I do not feel so alone now. Not an island anymore but a peninsula. Have a great weekend.
Comment from nancyjam
Well rhymed and metered poem about the need to
write. It can be a release or a way to live parts
of life again.
there are many reasons we write, all of them good.
Nancy
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2016
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Well rhymed and metered poem about the need to
write. It can be a release or a way to live parts
of life again.
there are many reasons we write, all of them good.
Nancy
Comment Written 23-Jul-2016
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2016
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I do thank you for reviewing and your kind words. I am happy that you were able to get something out of it. Have a great weekend.
Comment from harmony13
Excellent Poem! The author's words were creative, interesting and thought
provoking. The poem flows and connects well. The artwork is perfect and compliments the theme and words of this poem.
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2016
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Excellent Poem! The author's words were creative, interesting and thought
provoking. The poem flows and connects well. The artwork is perfect and compliments the theme and words of this poem.
Comment Written 22-Jul-2016
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2016
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Thank you for your great review. I am so pleased that I am receiving such a positive response when I expected the opposite. I am not the only one that feels that way so now I can go to bed and know that I am not an island but a peninsula. Have a super weekend.
Comment from Nika2016
This is an expression of feeling most of us feel but do not put into words...You did it so nicely.
Smile. The presentation is also nice.
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reply by the author on 22-Jul-2016
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This is an expression of feeling most of us feel but do not put into words...You did it so nicely.
Smile. The presentation is also nice.
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Comment Written 22-Jul-2016
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2016
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Thank you for your great review. I am so pleased that I am receiving such a positive response when I expected the opposite. I am not the only one that feels that way so now I can go to bed and know that I am not an island but a peninsula. Have a super weekend.
Comment from WalkerMan
A good reason for writing is clearly expressed in this poem. The end rhyme in second and fourth lines of each stanza works. As it is not intended to be singable, the somewhat uneven meter is not important. Overall, well done.
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2016
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A good reason for writing is clearly expressed in this poem. The end rhyme in second and fourth lines of each stanza works. As it is not intended to be singable, the somewhat uneven meter is not important. Overall, well done.
Comment Written 22-Jul-2016
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2016
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Thank you for your great review. I am so pleased that I am receiving such a positive response when I expected the opposite. I am not the only one that feels that way so now I can go to bed and know that I am not an island but a peninsula. Have a super weekend.
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You're welcome. You really are not alone in your reason. Writing is cathartic for many, as you can freely express yourself knowing that others are at least reading (listening) and possibly agreeing/empathizing. -- Mike
Comment from RoostyNester
The release of tension, I believe is for all of us! I like your poem and believe it to be well written in style and rhyme! The subject...we can all relate to! Nice poem!
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2016
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The release of tension, I believe is for all of us! I like your poem and believe it to be well written in style and rhyme! The subject...we can all relate to! Nice poem!
Comment Written 22-Jul-2016
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2016
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Thank you so much. Have a great weekend.
Comment from Pantygynt
Some absolutely delightful feminine rhymes here that make this stand out. Misrepresentation/trepidation, summation/occasion and the lovely assonance on the first syllable, and near rhyme on the second of surface/purpose. You may write for all the reasons you say but I am glad you write when you write like this.
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2016
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Some absolutely delightful feminine rhymes here that make this stand out. Misrepresentation/trepidation, summation/occasion and the lovely assonance on the first syllable, and near rhyme on the second of surface/purpose. You may write for all the reasons you say but I am glad you write when you write like this.
Comment Written 22-Jul-2016
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2016
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I appreciate your review because I value your opinion and have had some very good suggestions for improvement. You have a way of getting your idea across without giving the writer the sense of being stupid. Thank you again and I do hope you start more contests that have a challenge.
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Thanks for the compliment. Although I created the form it was Yeltel who actually sponsaored the challenge.
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You are so very welcome.
Comment from Mary Wakeford
Very telling and insightful, Annie. I very much enjoyed this and I suspect writing is more of a therapeutic exercise guided by creativity for most of us.
Excellent choices for rhyming and
Flow. No suggestions to offer for improvement.
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2016
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Very telling and insightful, Annie. I very much enjoyed this and I suspect writing is more of a therapeutic exercise guided by creativity for most of us.
Excellent choices for rhyming and
Flow. No suggestions to offer for improvement.
Comment Written 22-Jul-2016
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2016
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Thank you for your review. I am happy that you enjoyed it and were able to relate to at least a part of it. Have a great weekend.
