Garden Spider
Nonet-competition7 total reviews
Comment from Leineco
Great use of the nonet! And such a gorgeous picture you paint
with compelling imagery. I applaud your excellent enjambment
and line brake, that reads smoothly (something so many nonets
stumble at)
Very nicely done :-)
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2016
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Great use of the nonet! And such a gorgeous picture you paint
with compelling imagery. I applaud your excellent enjambment
and line brake, that reads smoothly (something so many nonets
stumble at)
Very nicely done :-)
Comment Written 23-Jul-2016
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2016
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Thank you
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written Nonet poem. The spider spins his web in the corner to catch insects for his dinner. Good luck with the contest.
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2016
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A very well-written Nonet poem. The spider spins his web in the corner to catch insects for his dinner. Good luck with the contest.
Comment Written 22-Jul-2016
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2016
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Thank you for your review
Comment from mvbrooks
Enjoyed the inclusion of alliteration -- especially the phrase "a creepy crawley creature" that's the most positive words I'm encountered to describe a spider.
reply by the author on 21-Jul-2016
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Enjoyed the inclusion of alliteration -- especially the phrase "a creepy crawley creature" that's the most positive words I'm encountered to describe a spider.
Comment Written 21-Jul-2016
reply by the author on 21-Jul-2016
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Thank you for your review
Comment from Bollie
This is a very clever and creative poem. This is the best Nonet poem that I've read yet. The picture really makes for a great presentation. This is a great entry. Best of luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 21-Jul-2016
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This is a very clever and creative poem. This is the best Nonet poem that I've read yet. The picture really makes for a great presentation. This is a great entry. Best of luck in the contest.
Comment Written 21-Jul-2016
reply by the author on 21-Jul-2016
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Thank you for your review
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You're very welcome.
Have a wonderful night.
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You're very welcome.
Have a wonderful night.
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You're very welcome.
Have a wonderful night.
Comment from rspoet
This could be a fine entry for the contest
but I count the five syllables line:
"spinning and creating" as six syllables
and will be disqualified
Otherwise, the nonet is fine with good imagery
and use of alliteration
Excellent picture to match
Good luck in the contest
reply by the author on 21-Jul-2016
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This could be a fine entry for the contest
but I count the five syllables line:
"spinning and creating" as six syllables
and will be disqualified
Otherwise, the nonet is fine with good imagery
and use of alliteration
Excellent picture to match
Good luck in the contest
Comment Written 21-Jul-2016
reply by the author on 21-Jul-2016
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Thank you for your review. I have dropped a word.
Comment from MacMhuirich
Nicely crafted write with good alliteration and imagery. I love seeing the dew covered webs in the morning. Thank you for sharing and best wishes for the contest.
Bless you
John
reply by the author on 21-Jul-2016
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Nicely crafted write with good alliteration and imagery. I love seeing the dew covered webs in the morning. Thank you for sharing and best wishes for the contest.
Bless you
John
Comment Written 21-Jul-2016
reply by the author on 21-Jul-2016
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Thank you for your review
Comment from RodG
I like this nonet because:
(1) of your characterization of the spider. First we see him as a creepy creature scampering to his corner of the garden. Then we perceive him as an intricate artist whose work is superb.
(2) Your imagery is so graphic
(3) the amusing use of alliteration
reply by the author on 21-Jul-2016
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I like this nonet because:
(1) of your characterization of the spider. First we see him as a creepy creature scampering to his corner of the garden. Then we perceive him as an intricate artist whose work is superb.
(2) Your imagery is so graphic
(3) the amusing use of alliteration
Comment Written 21-Jul-2016
reply by the author on 21-Jul-2016
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Thank you for your review
