Unconditional love
Puppy Love..12 total reviews
Comment from Leineco
Awwwww. . .
Such a simple thing - the affection that passes between
a dog and a dog lover. . .and yet, it melts our heart every
time! ;-)
Lovely write (though I would have used from instead
of by in the first line - but that is a teeny-tiny
nit to pick :-)
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2016
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Awwwww. . .
Such a simple thing - the affection that passes between
a dog and a dog lover. . .and yet, it melts our heart every
time! ;-)
Lovely write (though I would have used from instead
of by in the first line - but that is a teeny-tiny
nit to pick :-)
Comment Written 23-Jul-2016
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2016
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thanks for reading and the review!!!! very much appreciated!!! and i'll fix it
Comment from mvbrooks
I enjoyed how you inserted rhyme in a brief and syllable-constricted poem. I didn't notice anything wrong with the dog and I'm sure the girl with him didn't either. It made me think of childhood dogs. fun read.
reply by the author on 21-Jul-2016
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I enjoyed how you inserted rhyme in a brief and syllable-constricted poem. I didn't notice anything wrong with the dog and I'm sure the girl with him didn't either. It made me think of childhood dogs. fun read.
Comment Written 21-Jul-2016
reply by the author on 21-Jul-2016
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awe thanks so much for reading and review!!! much appreciated!!
Comment from Pantygynt
Another form of shortform syllabic poetry that i always think of as being related to the etheree probably because of the similarity of shape when centred. Pleasant sentiments here.
reply by the author on 20-Jul-2016
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Another form of shortform syllabic poetry that i always think of as being related to the etheree probably because of the similarity of shape when centred. Pleasant sentiments here.
Comment Written 20-Jul-2016
reply by the author on 20-Jul-2016
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It was fun....thanks for reading and the review!!! much appreciated!!! :-)))
Comment from flylikeaneagle
Keep cuddling with your puppy. I like the canoodle word and photo. Awwhhh. Sweetness of a child and precious memories. Such unconditional love that a child needs. Homework doesn't give us this love! Great nonet and alliteration. God bless. flylikeanegle
reply by the author on 20-Jul-2016
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Keep cuddling with your puppy. I like the canoodle word and photo. Awwhhh. Sweetness of a child and precious memories. Such unconditional love that a child needs. Homework doesn't give us this love! Great nonet and alliteration. God bless. flylikeanegle
Comment Written 20-Jul-2016
reply by the author on 20-Jul-2016
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Canoodle!! isn't that a fun word!!!! thanks for reading and the great review!!! much appreciated!!
Comment from Ogden
An excellent nonet poem entry! It not only fulfills the difficult requirements of the form, but it also tells an appealing story.
Good luck in the contest!
Don
reply by the author on 20-Jul-2016
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An excellent nonet poem entry! It not only fulfills the difficult requirements of the form, but it also tells an appealing story.
Good luck in the contest!
Don
Comment Written 20-Jul-2016
reply by the author on 20-Jul-2016
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awe thanks so much for reading and the great review!!! much appreciated!!
Comment from Bollie
This is a lovely poem that emphasizes the unconditional love between man and dog. The picture really brings home the point of the poem. The only thing that I didn't really get was some of the rhyming or the lack thereof. There are 16 syllables before you get to "Met" and then only 7 syllables to get to its companion "Fret". I think you should have had compatible rhymes at the end of each verse like you did with "Be"(6), "Me" (5) and "Be" (4). It doesn't maintain the same rhythm in (9), (8) and (7) as it does in (6), (5) and (4). Overall though this is a really good poem.
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reply by the author on 19-Jul-2016
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This is a lovely poem that emphasizes the unconditional love between man and dog. The picture really brings home the point of the poem. The only thing that I didn't really get was some of the rhyming or the lack thereof. There are 16 syllables before you get to "Met" and then only 7 syllables to get to its companion "Fret". I think you should have had compatible rhymes at the end of each verse like you did with "Be"(6), "Me" (5) and "Be" (4). It doesn't maintain the same rhythm in (9), (8) and (7) as it does in (6), (5) and (4). Overall though this is a really good poem.
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Comment Written 19-Jul-2016
reply by the author on 19-Jul-2016
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Does it have to rhyme? idk...I thought i read this form doesn't have to rhyme....
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No it doesn't, I just feel that if you do implement a rhyming technique then
It flows a little better if it all rhymes.
This is a really good poem, I'm
speaking more out of personal preference. To me the rhythm isn't
consistent. Overall though a
Really good poem.
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No it doesn't, I just feel that if you do implement a rhyming technique then
It flows a little better if it all rhymes.
This is a really good poem, I'm
speaking more out of personal preference. To me the rhythm isn't
consistent. Overall though a
Really good poem.
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No it doesn't, I just feel that if you do implement a rhyming technique then
It flows a little better if it all rhymes.
This is a really good poem, I'm
speaking more out of personal preference. To me the rhythm isn't
consistent. Overall though a
Really good poem.
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oh i see..ok....let me work on it
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written Nonet. The subject is pure love between an animal and his owner. They will be friends for a lifetime growing up together.
reply by the author on 19-Jul-2016
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A very well-written Nonet. The subject is pure love between an animal and his owner. They will be friends for a lifetime growing up together.
Comment Written 19-Jul-2016
reply by the author on 19-Jul-2016
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Thanks so much for reading and the wonderful review Sandra!! very much appreciated!!!
Comment from Cory G
Awww. This poem is so sweet. Having a dog myself, I can totally relate to the unconditional love a dog gives you. I love the form of your poem and the cute pic of Lilly! Thanks for sharing. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 19-Jul-2016
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Awww. This poem is so sweet. Having a dog myself, I can totally relate to the unconditional love a dog gives you. I love the form of your poem and the cute pic of Lilly! Thanks for sharing. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 19-Jul-2016
reply by the author on 19-Jul-2016
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Thank you Cora!!!! Dogs are wonderful! Thanks for reading and the kind review!!!
Comment from Bill Schott
This nonet, Unconditional Love, is set up in the correct nine through one syllable format and carries the theme of love of pets to all of us who know what you mean.
reply by the author on 19-Jul-2016
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This nonet, Unconditional Love, is set up in the correct nine through one syllable format and carries the theme of love of pets to all of us who know what you mean.
Comment Written 19-Jul-2016
reply by the author on 19-Jul-2016
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Hi Bill! Thanks for reading and the great review!!!
Comment from RoostyNester
An animal will love forever if they are treated well. They are so much like a child. Their love is unconditional and it will last forever, if it is loved in return. Cute picture of little girl with her dog. Nice poem with style and charm of words. Very good.
reply by the author on 19-Jul-2016
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An animal will love forever if they are treated well. They are so much like a child. Their love is unconditional and it will last forever, if it is loved in return. Cute picture of little girl with her dog. Nice poem with style and charm of words. Very good.
Comment Written 18-Jul-2016
reply by the author on 19-Jul-2016
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Thank you for your wonderful review!!!!Much appreciated!!!
