My God
My longest relationship..10 total reviews
Comment from BermyBye50
Susan
Congrats on your win. This poem expresses in three lines the true definition of faith. Like you my longest relationship is also with our heavenly Father and his son. The key word in this poem is 'relationship' as faith is a gift from the father that requires the one believes that he exist and is real in order to have a lasting relationship.
Thank you for writing a powerful and inspirational Haiku about faith. It is a reminder to everyone as to how we all need to have a deep and profound relationship with our creator in our life's journey here on earth.
God bless,
Eugene
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2016
Susan
Congrats on your win. This poem expresses in three lines the true definition of faith. Like you my longest relationship is also with our heavenly Father and his son. The key word in this poem is 'relationship' as faith is a gift from the father that requires the one believes that he exist and is real in order to have a lasting relationship.
Thank you for writing a powerful and inspirational Haiku about faith. It is a reminder to everyone as to how we all need to have a deep and profound relationship with our creator in our life's journey here on earth.
God bless,
Eugene
Comment Written 23-Jul-2016
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2016
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thank you so much for your wonderful review!!!! very much appreciated!!!
Comment from EBC62
beautiful sentiment and so succinctly stated. Nothing more is needed to articulate the blessing of your relationship with Our Lord. The illustration also completes the poem with the bright expression of joy!
reply by the author on 17-Jul-2016
beautiful sentiment and so succinctly stated. Nothing more is needed to articulate the blessing of your relationship with Our Lord. The illustration also completes the poem with the bright expression of joy!
Comment Written 17-Jul-2016
reply by the author on 17-Jul-2016
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awe thanks!!!!
Comment from Ann Dudley Duncan
Hi there Susan! Congratulations on your big win. Absolutely fabulous. You are
getting to be quite the poet and I am so proud of you! Keep up the good work and
give my love to Lilly! Blessings!
reply by the author on 16-Jul-2016
Hi there Susan! Congratulations on your big win. Absolutely fabulous. You are
getting to be quite the poet and I am so proud of you! Keep up the good work and
give my love to Lilly! Blessings!
Comment Written 16-Jul-2016
reply by the author on 16-Jul-2016
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:-))))))) ANN!! can you believe it!!! Lil is doing well, got a little job at a local store here in town!!...( new doctor to brace back ) but doing well!!! Thanks Ann!!
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Wow! Wow! Wow! Good for her Susan! She must get her brains from her Mother! LOL
By the way Susan, did I say how pretty you are as well as smart!!! LOL
Comment from reconciled
Glory and myself
and as Rett as my witness
I dont give a damn....
ah it was the picture....it reminded me of Scarlet for second. Hello....-smile-...I like yours the best. thats a five seven five I wrote there....you can have it. love to you...michael
reply by the author on 16-Jul-2016
Glory and myself
and as Rett as my witness
I dont give a damn....
ah it was the picture....it reminded me of Scarlet for second. Hello....-smile-...I like yours the best. thats a five seven five I wrote there....you can have it. love to you...michael
Comment Written 16-Jul-2016
reply by the author on 16-Jul-2016
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HAHA!!!! oh you funny!!!! thanks for the reading,reviewing and the laugh!!!
Comment from Judy Couch
Very good expression of your values. I like the idea that this is the longest relationship. It should be for all of us since He created us.
reply by the author on 15-Jul-2016
Very good expression of your values. I like the idea that this is the longest relationship. It should be for all of us since He created us.
Comment Written 15-Jul-2016
reply by the author on 15-Jul-2016
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Thank you for reading and the review Judy!!! much appreciated!!
Comment from Teri7
This is a very good contest entry you have penned. You used very good descriptive wording and very good imagery. Good luck in the contest. hugs, Teri
reply by the author on 15-Jul-2016
This is a very good contest entry you have penned. You used very good descriptive wording and very good imagery. Good luck in the contest. hugs, Teri
Comment Written 15-Jul-2016
reply by the author on 15-Jul-2016
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Thank you muchly Teri!!!
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you are so welcome. Teri
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you are so welcome. Teri
Comment from Susanne M. Psyris
A very beautiful and well-penned 5-7-5 Spiritual Haiku entry! Your words are so uplifting and impressively-chosen to create depth to this short piece. Good luck in the contest. God bless and hugs, Susanne
reply by the author on 15-Jul-2016
A very beautiful and well-penned 5-7-5 Spiritual Haiku entry! Your words are so uplifting and impressively-chosen to create depth to this short piece. Good luck in the contest. God bless and hugs, Susanne
Comment Written 15-Jul-2016
reply by the author on 15-Jul-2016
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Thank you Susanne!!!
Comment from TheresaWilliams
Good entry to the contest! The picture that you chose enhances the poem and speaks volumes to the depth of love. In twelve words the writer has packed in a lifetime of faith. Good luck in the contest!
reply by the author on 15-Jul-2016
Good entry to the contest! The picture that you chose enhances the poem and speaks volumes to the depth of love. In twelve words the writer has packed in a lifetime of faith. Good luck in the contest!
Comment Written 15-Jul-2016
reply by the author on 15-Jul-2016
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Thank you very much for reading and the review Theresa!!! much appreciated!!
Comment from Sis Cat
This is a POWERFUL poem and statement. It is told simply and honestly with faith. Thank you for sharing. I wish you success in the contest.
reply by the author on 15-Jul-2016
This is a POWERFUL poem and statement. It is told simply and honestly with faith. Thank you for sharing. I wish you success in the contest.
Comment Written 15-Jul-2016
reply by the author on 15-Jul-2016
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Thank you so much for reading the the great review!!
Comment from MacMhuirich
Amen, a relationship you can depend on. Well crafted words that speak volumes. Thank you for sharing and best wishes for the contest.
Bless you
John
reply by the author on 15-Jul-2016
Amen, a relationship you can depend on. Well crafted words that speak volumes. Thank you for sharing and best wishes for the contest.
Bless you
John
Comment Written 14-Jul-2016
reply by the author on 15-Jul-2016
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John!!! Thank you!! always appreciate you reviews!!!