My Credo
How I live my life.4 total reviews
Comment from Judy Couch
This article is written well. You stated your beliefs in a clear and understandable manner. You made no grammatical errors that I saw. Great job.
reply by the author on 05-Jul-2016
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This article is written well. You stated your beliefs in a clear and understandable manner. You made no grammatical errors that I saw. Great job.
Comment Written 05-Jul-2016
reply by the author on 05-Jul-2016
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WOW! Thank you so much, Judy, for the all the starlight--it is totally unexpected. Your encouraging critique is also very much appreciated.
Comment from Susanne M. Psyris
This is a very good entry into the I Believe contest. Your words are so sincere and so humane. If only everyone thought like this, think how wonderful life would be. I wish you good luck in the contest. God bless and hugs, Susanne
reply by the author on 05-Jul-2016
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This is a very good entry into the I Believe contest. Your words are so sincere and so humane. If only everyone thought like this, think how wonderful life would be. I wish you good luck in the contest. God bless and hugs, Susanne
Comment Written 05-Jul-2016
reply by the author on 05-Jul-2016
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Thank you so much for the generous rating and encouraging comments; both are VERY much appreciated!
Comment from MacMhuirich
What a beautiful write, your beliefs laid bare for us to read and for us to ponder if we are falling short in some department. Love the artwork you have chosen, the empty tomb and the dove. Best wishes for the contest.
Bless you
John
reply by the author on 05-Jul-2016
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What a beautiful write, your beliefs laid bare for us to read and for us to ponder if we are falling short in some department. Love the artwork you have chosen, the empty tomb and the dove. Best wishes for the contest.
Bless you
John
Comment Written 05-Jul-2016
reply by the author on 05-Jul-2016
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Thank you so much for the generous rating and encouraging comments; both are VERY much appreciated!
Comment from Jay Squires
I have not read of a more succinct and heartfelt statement of beliefs than yours. If the profundity of faith were the measure of this contest, you would be a shoo-in! Good luck, but you've already won something far more valuable.
take up residence somewhere-forever. [Always use an EM dash (--) with no space before or after to separate one clause from another.]
reinforcing I am too blessed to be stressed. [It is rare that I suggest a person to add a "that" to a sentence. I spend so much effort trying to remove them from my own writing. But I can't help but say a bridge word, like "that" after "reinforcing" would improve the flow of your sentence.]
reply by the author on 05-Jul-2016
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I have not read of a more succinct and heartfelt statement of beliefs than yours. If the profundity of faith were the measure of this contest, you would be a shoo-in! Good luck, but you've already won something far more valuable.
take up residence somewhere-forever. [Always use an EM dash (--) with no space before or after to separate one clause from another.]
reinforcing I am too blessed to be stressed. [It is rare that I suggest a person to add a "that" to a sentence. I spend so much effort trying to remove them from my own writing. But I can't help but say a bridge word, like "that" after "reinforcing" would improve the flow of your sentence.]
Comment Written 05-Jul-2016
reply by the author on 05-Jul-2016
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THANK YOU so much for the generous rating, and more importantly, for the encouraging comments and vote of confidence. I was a bit hesitant in submitting this piece but feel validated after your remarks. I also agree with your suggested corrections and will revise.
