Comment from rockinm76233

Good

I gave you four stars, not because your writing is lacking, your points are well taken, but simply because you did not separate your paragraphs which would have made reading so much easier. Yes, our country is indeed in shambles. God help us all.

 Comment Written 18-Aug-2016

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reply by the author on 18-Aug-2016

Thank you for the kind review and the good tip on the paragraphs which I will edit. Kindest regards: HIS GRAYNESS

Comment from damommy

Excellent

Hooray for everything you said. I said when he ran the first time that it was like the Manchurian Candidate. For me, his name said it all.

People are beginning to realize what's happening, but is it too late? I hope not. It's getting scary. Not the world I grew up in.

Everything you said is true, and you said it very well. Thank you. 8-)

 Comment Written 04-Aug-2016

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reply by the author on 04-Aug-2016

Thanks so much Damommy and I sure hope it is NOT too late to expose him. Now today; the discovery of four hundred million in ransom money slicked through to ISIS under the guise of a hostage trade...all under cover! What's it going to take to get America to wake up?? I really appreciate your fine review and hope to see you often! Blessings! HIS GRAYNESS

Comment from BeasPeas

Exceptional

I agree with your assessment completely, Vance. I read twenty years ago of the plan infiltration to elect a Muslim to the highest office possible in USA politics. They certainly have succeeded. The idea was for foreign-born Muslim men to go to college here, meet and marry American women. However this would not be assimilation, but rather faux assimilation for their agenda. Many people have no idea how they are being duped--and which is scarier, they don't care. Marilyn

 Comment Written 28-Jul-2016

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reply by the author on 29-Jul-2016

Thanks Marilyn for your kind review and I'm glad to know there are at least a few INTELLIGENT AND CARING "THINKERS" out there, such as you, that might hold up the flag of warning to those blind and careless who just waddle through each day with a shrug and nod and no real concern. Have a wonderful day and thanks again....I always enjoy your work !!! BTW: Vance

Comment from Kingsrookviii

Exceptional

I may have to frame this, my friend. Amen. This is all true. There is an agenda afoot. I have a book (an old one) by Eldridge Clever (I think) who was at one time part of this movement in the late 60's. The book is called Soul On Ice and it spells much of what is happening out in clear terms. I may have to go back and research this, but it doesn't matter. Stopping this damage is critical.

 Comment Written 18-Jul-2016

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reply by the author on 18-Jul-2016

Thank you dear friend, for your kind review and awareness of this seriously dark (in so many ways) Individual. The list of his damaging and intentionally destructive issues is actually much greater and I'm simply stunned at the deafness and blindness of the American public who seem to have become simply "unconscious" of what is happening to us. I really appreciate your kind review and personal reply. Vance

reply by Kingsrookviii on 18-Jul-2016

Me too. It is incredible. Keep up the great work.

Comment from Spitfire

Excellent

If I followed the news, I'd be terrified for our country. It's scary how Obama has fooled the people. Now Hillary and Trump are doing much the same thing. I fear for my children and grandchildren. Is there anyplace in the world today that is free from corruption?

 Comment Written 15-Jul-2016

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reply by the author on 16-Jul-2016

THANKS SHARI, FOR YOUR REVIEW AND STARS. CERTAINLY, I SEE HILLARY AS CONTINUATION OF MORE O'BUMMER TRASH BUT I DO BELIEVE TRUMP WILL CLEAN UP THE MESS LEFT BY BOTH OF THEM. MANY MAY NOT LIKE THE PAINS NEEDED TO CLEAN UP BUT WE ARE IN SERIOUSLY DEEP DOODOO AND HOPEFULY SOMEONE WILL EXPOSE O'BUMMER BEFORE HE CAN UNLEASH HIS FINAL DESTRUCTIVE PLANS ON AMERICA. BLESSINGS AND GREAT HOPES AND PRAYERS: VANCE

Comment from Ima L. Ami

Excellent

Hello His Grayness,

I regret that I don't have 6 stars left to give you for this work. I completely agree with the points you made here and pray that the people of our great country wake up to the massive corruption and tyranny that is being forced on "We the People".

Being from New Orleans, I witnessed first hand the actions of our government when Martial Law was declared after Hurricane Katrina. I have an amazing video one of our friends made regarding his experience, and that of an 88 year old lady (Miss June) whom he interviews in the video. It was an harrowing experience as they had over 8 feet of water in their homes and were stranded in the general crowd until my friend and I found them and intervened, thus the name of the video: Rescued

I would love to share this video with you; something tells me you would find it interesting.

Thanks again for sharing your thoughts, as well as these undeniable facts about BHO.

-Suzanne

 Comment Written 07-Jul-2016

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reply by the author on 07-Jul-2016

Wow! What an exciting message, wonderful review, and stars!! I'm extremely excited by your perspectives and would love to know more. I'd love to see the video. My sister and cousin both live in NO and went through Katrina so I know it was horrendous. Unfortunately, we now face Electromagnetic PULSE threats (and have always from the nature of the universe) but such energies have now been developed by man and are capable of mass destruction worse than any known bombs or ten Katrina's! Please note my email is: vls@market-karma.com and would love to exchange further dialog with you. Many sincere thanks for you wonderful review! Vance

Comment from Judy Couch

Excellent

This is clearly stated. I have believed for some time that his intent is to bring down this country. I didn't have all the information that you have. I can't believe so many people were stupid enough to vote him into office twice.

 Comment Written 05-Jul-2016

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reply by the author on 06-Jul-2016

Thanks so much Judy, I'm deeply concerned as to WHY such obvious matters have been so blatantly ignored by our government while much of the news media has hammered them for so long as well? I have actual videos of Obama talking about his Muslim prayers/music etc. in his native KENYA. Also of his grandmother clearly stating that he was born in Kenya. How can this be ignored when available to the world and easily our government? Do what you can to spread the word; Blessings and best wishes! Vance

Comment from judester

Excellent

I find it hard to believe this. Baraka began his terms with quite a mess left by Bush. America is really struggling these days and it will be interesting to see who comes to the White House next. Bernie was my hope, but if Trump wins, then you will really have something to cry about. Cheers, j

 Comment Written 05-Jul-2016

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reply by the author on 05-Jul-2016

Thank you for the stars for the writing structure while you clearly disagree with my attempt to WARN of great danger, I sincerely appreciate your commendable ethics! Based on the happenings of today with Hillary and O-Bummer, the evidence of political insider "corruptness is just more fuel for the Trump engine and while I don't support his un-polished manner, I must agree with his perspective on the deep corruption we have experienced with O-Bummer and I believe his support of Hillary will hurt her!

Comment from Susanne M. Psyris

Excellent

Very good entry into the I Believe contest. You have put forth a strong and powerful argument about the lack of American patriotism shown by O'Bama throughout his presidency. Thank God, his term is nearly over! Good luck in the contest. God bless and hugs, Susanne

 Comment Written 05-Jul-2016

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reply by the author on 05-Jul-2016

Thank you Susan for you kind and encouraging review and stars.

Comment from giraffmang

Good

Hi there,

Quite an interesting rant you have produced here for this competition. I think you need to reclassify this piece though as it is definitely not a script. It also needs a bit of a proofread.

MUSLIM TERRIORISM - should that be terrorism?

to USA prisons! & also - the exclamation mark should probably be in brackets here.

while supporting immigration - While.

with weapons
and ammunition. - unnecessary line break here.

'armed" - don't mix quote forms as you have here.

IBELIEVE - need a space in there.

All the best
GMG

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 Comment Written 05-Jul-2016

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reply by the author on 05-Jul-2016

Thanks for you meaningful and helpful review. It is much appreciated.