Act of Endurance
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12 total reviews
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
Great job. Excellent word choices. The descriptions were excellent and this was easy to read. A very enjoyable and well written poem.
reply by the author on 15-Jul-2016
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Great job. Excellent word choices. The descriptions were excellent and this was easy to read. A very enjoyable and well written poem.
Comment Written 08-Jul-2016
reply by the author on 15-Jul-2016
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Glad aspects of this write was pleasing. Thanking you for generous rate and captivating statement.
Comment from Hayley Solomon
A surprising five stars. I was not sure at the start, and 'cries' are 'ies' not 'ys'
but by end of poem I was sure it was five star.
This is a very good line:
Snap sound into night its whirl and pop heard, again whip snap with its silence with night.
Well done, it moved me.
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reply by the author on 15-Jul-2016
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A surprising five stars. I was not sure at the start, and 'cries' are 'ies' not 'ys'
but by end of poem I was sure it was five star.
This is a very good line:
Snap sound into night its whirl and pop heard, again whip snap with its silence with night.
Well done, it moved me.
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 07-Jul-2016
reply by the author on 15-Jul-2016
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Glad this write was pleasing. Thanking you for generous rate and welcomed thoughts.
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