( Daybreak Morning Treat)
Dreamsicle sunrise..4 total reviews
Comment from rydere
Nice one and short I like the poem and the back ground too so please don't stop on my account please keep up the great work.
reply by the author on 01-Jul-2016
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Nice one and short I like the poem and the back ground too so please don't stop on my account please keep up the great work.
Comment Written 01-Jul-2016
reply by the author on 01-Jul-2016
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stop on your account? What do you mean?,,,,glad you enjoyed this piece...thanks for the review!
Comment from marthastruber
I love the idea that the morning sky is like a flavor of a frozen dessert. The colors that I see when I read this are very vivid and bright with orange and some white in the clouds. The sun is beautiful in the early morning (or evening) with the vast array of color hues that it produces in the sky. Though, I would not eat a dreamsicle in the morning, (maybe a peach yogurt) but you do give a great description in the few words that you use. Awesome!
reply by the author on 30-Jun-2016
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I love the idea that the morning sky is like a flavor of a frozen dessert. The colors that I see when I read this are very vivid and bright with orange and some white in the clouds. The sun is beautiful in the early morning (or evening) with the vast array of color hues that it produces in the sky. Though, I would not eat a dreamsicle in the morning, (maybe a peach yogurt) but you do give a great description in the few words that you use. Awesome!
Comment Written 30-Jun-2016
reply by the author on 30-Jun-2016
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I would SOOOOOO eat a Dreamsicle in the morning!! LOL Don't ya just love that color sunrise????? thanks or reading and the wonderful review!!! Much appreciated!!!
Comment from RodG
Summer & ice cream trucks is what you reminded me of here with the reference to dream sickles. Very appropriate metaphor for a sunrise. Effective use of aliteration to help create atmosphere.
reply by the author on 30-Jun-2016
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Summer & ice cream trucks is what you reminded me of here with the reference to dream sickles. Very appropriate metaphor for a sunrise. Effective use of aliteration to help create atmosphere.
Comment Written 30-Jun-2016
reply by the author on 30-Jun-2016
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YEP...those are the best ! I love when the sky is that color...thanks for reading and the review!!! much appreciated!!!!!!
Comment from LIJ Red
A few miles from my home is the ideal place to watch the sun rise over distant mountains. The whole range of sun colors is hit sooner or later.
I am poor judge of Haikus, but this one seems to satisfy the prompt.
reply by the author on 30-Jun-2016
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A few miles from my home is the ideal place to watch the sun rise over distant mountains. The whole range of sun colors is hit sooner or later.
I am poor judge of Haikus, but this one seems to satisfy the prompt.
Comment Written 30-Jun-2016
reply by the author on 30-Jun-2016
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Where do you live?????? When i'm in Vegas,,,always hike Red rock..
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In the Blue Ridge Mountains of Georgia, only a
couple of thousand feet up...
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oh nice!
