Comment from JP49

Excellent

This is so funny and I am sure it has happened to many. Lovey rhyming and a really good flow to this poem. Good entry for contest.

 Comment Written 29-Jun-2016

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reply by the author on 29-Jun-2016

Thank you!!!!! memories huh? LOL thanks for reading and the great review!!! much appreciated!!!!

Comment from Susanne M. Psyris

Excellent

This is a good entry into the "Not funny but funny" contest. A woman's worst beach nightmare! Good rhythm and rhyme throughout and the flow is well read aloud. Enjoyed this entry. Good luck in the contest! God bless and hugs, Susanne

 Comment Written 29-Jun-2016

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reply by the author on 29-Jun-2016

Worst nightmare!!! OMG!!!!!!! glad it made you smile!!!! thanks for the review!!!!

Comment from zekeziemann

Excellent

Well thought out and well rhymed. We all have had similar situations that you just reminded us of and we all have good friends who kid us about it yet today,

 Comment Written 28-Jun-2016

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reply by the author on 28-Jun-2016

yep!!!! such is life!!! thanks for reading and the review!!!

Comment from chcbeck

Excellent

This is funny and I am sure we all have experienced a wardrobe malfunction at some point. Your poem rhymes well, it did seem a bit wordy in parts but a great story and contest entry too good luck.

 Comment Written 28-Jun-2016

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reply by the author on 28-Jun-2016

LOL I"M too wordy!!!!! thanks for reading and the great review!!!