Nightmare date
first and only date....16 total reviews
Comment from Ginger Banks
I laughed! This is too funny, I've met a few people like this, with terrible manners. If I'd done half the things, i see and hear at the tables, now-a-days i wouldn't be able to write this today, I wouldn't have lived to tell about it. Thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 27-Jun-2016
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I laughed! This is too funny, I've met a few people like this, with terrible manners. If I'd done half the things, i see and hear at the tables, now-a-days i wouldn't be able to write this today, I wouldn't have lived to tell about it. Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 26-Jun-2016
reply by the author on 27-Jun-2016
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I know right!!! I had fun with this piece!!! Thanks for reading and the review!!! glad it made you laugh!!!
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You're welcome
Comment from cterp
The noises I'm imagining are coming from me, and they include belching and vomiting. The picture didn't help one bit. And it's dinner time here. Yuck-o. Thanks for the excellent writing. I'll try to forget all about it.
reply by the author on 26-Jun-2016
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The noises I'm imagining are coming from me, and they include belching and vomiting. The picture didn't help one bit. And it's dinner time here. Yuck-o. Thanks for the excellent writing. I'll try to forget all about it.
Comment Written 26-Jun-2016
reply by the author on 26-Jun-2016
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LOL toughen up buttercup! heheh...yes, that pick IS pretty gross!!!!!...but thank you for the laugh, reading and the great review!!!! much appreciated!!!! What's for dinner? I'm hungry! :-)
Comment from lfemine
Haha! What a nightmare date! Very funny! Very well written, the rhymes work really well but no awkwardness. Great shot, too!
reply by the author on 26-Jun-2016
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Haha! What a nightmare date! Very funny! Very well written, the rhymes work really well but no awkwardness. Great shot, too!
Comment Written 26-Jun-2016
reply by the author on 26-Jun-2016
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Thank you so much!!! First time trying this! I had FUN!!! Thanks for the wonderful review and the stars!!!! Glad you laughed!!!!
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Very welcome! It's hilarious, you have a great sense of humor, explore it :)
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Pandora's box has just been opened! I will :-) hehe
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Good! :)
Comment from William Ross
hahaha yeah that would be a nightmare date, good job on this some great words for this style prompt. good luck on this and have a great day
reply by the author on 26-Jun-2016
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hahaha yeah that would be a nightmare date, good job on this some great words for this style prompt. good luck on this and have a great day
Comment Written 26-Jun-2016
reply by the author on 26-Jun-2016
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total nightmare...hehehe...thanks so much for reading friend!!!
Comment from RYME4U
Very well done! You picked the perfect picture to match your words., The rhythm and rhyme are good and the humor is wry and subtle, Good job~
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reply by the author on 26-Jun-2016
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Very well done! You picked the perfect picture to match your words., The rhythm and rhyme are good and the humor is wry and subtle, Good job~
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Comment Written 26-Jun-2016
reply by the author on 26-Jun-2016
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hehehe Thank you!!!! I had fun with this!!! thanks for reading and the review!!! Much appreciated!!!
Comment from djeckert
ha ha. very funny, sounds like the nightmare date for sure. I wonder what hed be like when hes not on his best behavior.a good cacophony of sounds. Good luck ,and a very strong entry I think. God bless
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reply by the author on 26-Jun-2016
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ha ha. very funny, sounds like the nightmare date for sure. I wonder what hed be like when hes not on his best behavior.a good cacophony of sounds. Good luck ,and a very strong entry I think. God bless
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Comment Written 26-Jun-2016
reply by the author on 26-Jun-2016
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Thank you!!! I had FUN with this one!!!! for sure!!! thanks for reading and the review!
