Comment from damommy

Excellent

Like you, I can't imagine what it would have been like to walk with Jesus in His time. Would we have known Him for Who He was?

This life would be awfully dismal without Him in my life. Many times, I wouldn't have made it without Him.

Lovely poem about the love of Jesus and what it can do for us. 8-)

 Comment Written 25-Jun-2016

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reply by the author on 25-Jun-2016

So true my friend. Thank you for the great review. love, Teri

Comment from foxangie123

Excellent

So stunning and lovely my friend a write. One can feel the real passion of wondering just that. This is an exceptional piece of touching writing. Way to go.

 Comment Written 25-Jun-2016

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reply by the author on 25-Jun-2016

Thank you my sweet friend. hugs, Teri

Comment from Jacqueline M Franklin

Excellent

Hi, Teri

= Another wonderful testimony.
= I like the symbolism with giving one's heart in place of the apple.
= Excellent write.

(*<*) A Smile Is A Frown Turned Upside-Down (*>*)
Cheers & Blessings ... Jacqueline ~ Jackie ~ Jax

 Comment Written 25-Jun-2016

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reply by the author on 25-Jun-2016

Thank you my friend for the great review. hugs, Teri

Comment from c_lucas

Excellent

Jesus promises to be our full time companion. Your post is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for a very promising read.

 Comment Written 25-Jun-2016

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reply by the author on 25-Jun-2016

Thank you Charlie for the great review. hugs, Teri

Comment from Ric Myworld

Excellent

"Faith of a mustard seed." It's so refreshing when a believer trusts in God's holy word. Using their own actions to give witness every day, so those who have yet to repent can see the joy in their forgiven heart. Offering sinners a gentle nudge in the right direction. Great job. :-)

 Comment Written 25-Jun-2016

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reply by the author on 25-Jun-2016

Thank you Ric for the great review. hugs, Teri

Comment from BeasPeas

Excellent

An excellent poem, Teri. The comfort and piece of mind by turning our life over to him is huge. Good wording, rhyming, and clarity of thought throughout. Marilyn

 Comment Written 25-Jun-2016

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reply by the author on 25-Jun-2016

Thank you my friend for the great review. hugs, Teri

Comment from Sandra du Plessis

Excellent

A very well-written spiritual and uplifting poem. There is nothing better than to walk with Jesus everyday. We can still do so today when we learn about His Word.

 Comment Written 25-Jun-2016

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reply by the author on 25-Jun-2016

Thank you for your great review. hugs Teri

Comment from Walu Feral

Excellent

G'day Teri. Very nicely written and presented mate. Nice even flow and a great picture to compliment it. The story line is superb as well. Overall, very enjoyable work.

Well done.

Cheers Fez

 Comment Written 25-Jun-2016

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reply by the author on 25-Jun-2016

Thank you for the great review. Blessings. Teri

Comment from royowen

Excellent

How does God hold the universe together? With the power of love. Why does He fill us with His love spark? By the power of His love! I guess that's why He does the things He does. well done, a great poem of thanksgiving,
And a prayer that others will know what you have. Beautifully written Teri, articulate and sincere, well done, beautifully written in aabb rhyming and mono rhyme, well done, Teri, blessings, Roy

 Comment Written 25-Jun-2016

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reply by the author on 25-Jun-2016

You know Roy, I can only write the way I do now thanks to Him. Thank you for the great review. Teri

reply by royowen on 25-Jun-2016

Most welcome

Comment from Bill Schott

Excellent

This spiritual poem, Wondering, is a nice testimony to one's understanding of faith in a power that transcends all of the worldly things that we can't control. A steady rod and staff make living more enjoyable.

 Comment Written 25-Jun-2016

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reply by the author on 25-Jun-2016

Thank you Bill for the great review. Teri