Comment from Joan E.

Excellent

Thank you for reminding us to be hopeful and focused. Your final lines of "dancing footprints on sands never felt before/hope and dreams" are quite memorable and inspirational. Hugs and happy weekend- Joan

 Comment Written 25-Jun-2016

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reply by the author on 26-Jun-2016

Hey J...-smile-....sorry i havent been around....working late lately....hope you had a wonderful trip...and am glad you're home. love to you michael

reply by Joan E. on 26-Jun-2016

My son often works late and sometimes seven days a week. You can do that while you're young, but I'm happy to be retired and busier than I ever was--just in a more relaxed way! Smiles- Joan

Comment from MizKat

Excellent

Hi Michael,

You have written a wonderful poem and the picture you put up with it goes really nice with it . Thanks for sharing your great work with us. I enjoyed reading every word and will be looking for more to read.

Kat

 Comment Written 25-Jun-2016

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reply by the author on 28-Jun-2016

Hi...-smile-...ah thank you Mom....whenever you come around so does the sun....love to you michael

reply by MizKat on 29-Jun-2016

You're very welcome my darling son. I love reading your work and thanks for reading mine. Love you, Mom

Comment from royowen

Excellent

A fine set of adjectives without conjunctions with a spattering of verbs and nouns, displaying emotional upheaval and angst both in the world and personally, desiring that unity will one day unite all, my assessment anyway, Michael, well done my friend, you have a great heart, but sound sad, blessings, Roy

 Comment Written 24-Jun-2016

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reply by the author on 24-Jun-2016

Hey Roy...-smile-
ah well not quite what I was shooting for but hope and disappointment quite often meet up unwanted in expected....-snile- no this was my manic depressed attempt at encouraging "believing" in Peter Pan and the impossible.....but I've run out of medication so.....its hit and miss these days...haha...love to you Sir. Michael

reply by royowen on 24-Jun-2016

Oh well good one, Michael,

Comment from johnwilson

Excellent

This is excellent work and flows smoothly..not complete sentences but I feel that's part of its rapture...I would only suggest to separate the words from each other a little more, e.g. instantaneous impossible disappeared invisible....yet I'm just the reviewer and a bit inept at the reviewing once I read something that's this good.

 Comment Written 24-Jun-2016

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reply by the author on 10-Jul-2016

Hey John...-smile-
appreciate it Sir...love to you. Michael

Comment from l.raven

Exceptional

HI Michael, I hope and prayer all your dreams come true...that all in your life goes forward....and it will be all you want it to be....filled with love...it's a wonderful poem...and a beautiful picture...love Linda xxoo

 Comment Written 24-Jun-2016

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reply by the author on 10-Jul-2016

Hi Linda...-smile-
sorry I'm running late. Well thank you...I hope and pray they do too. love to you...Michael

reply by l.raven on 12-Jul-2016

Hi Michael, not to worry...I am running late as well...love to you too...and to Emmy...your so welcome...Linda xxoo

Comment from Ricky1024

Exceptional

Thanks so much for your fine depth poem.
Like the deepness and fully understood as I traded it to my birch Megan!
Also, My White friend Michelle!
(My sexy roomers)with massive tumors!
Breasts!
Ricky

 Comment Written 24-Jun-2016

Comment from robina1978

Excellent

A beautiful photo of a music box, that complements your poem perfectly. About hope and dreams. The world defines circles dizziness. Water changed into wine. I loved this free verse.

 Comment Written 24-Jun-2016

Comment from djsaxon

Excellent

Hey you - been a while. Good to see you haven't lost the magic pen. Succinct and evocative. A nice welcome back for me.

hugs - DJ

 Comment Written 24-Jun-2016

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reply by the author on 24-Jun-2016

ha...he DJ...-smile-
yea sure has been a while. things are bit different around here now. Not enough people anymore for honest evaluation of emotive effect, without " so called friendships" and " petty rivalries"
so yes...very happy to see some the old guard of the love of it just because...-smile-...hope all is well with you DJ. Big love back man...michael

reply by djsaxon on 24-Jun-2016

Think I may have turned my back on FS because of the elements you referred to (great grammar - not) back for another crack at fame LOL (also not). Love and hugs - DJ