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Viewing comments for Chapter 38 "Attack on Termiteville!"A delightful Childen Lesson Book.
5 total reviews
Comment from mermaids
You have created a unique poetic tale. Since it is bug season here on Cape Cod, I can relate to the termites. Excellent use of words and a smooth flow of story in poetic form.
reply by the author on 30-Jun-2016
You have created a unique poetic tale. Since it is bug season here on Cape Cod, I can relate to the termites. Excellent use of words and a smooth flow of story in poetic form.
Comment Written 30-Jun-2016
reply by the author on 30-Jun-2016
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Thanks so much for your review and kind Review!
Ricky 1024
Comment from Dustybones
Well the story is a bit insane, of course, as you might know that when it involves bugs. I do like the names of the critters very much. dustybones
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2016
Well the story is a bit insane, of course, as you might know that when it involves bugs. I do like the names of the critters very much. dustybones
Comment Written 25-Jun-2016
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2016
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Thanks so much for your review and kind thoughts of My poetry.
Ricky 1024.
Comment from Susanne M. Psyris
lmao...yes, I DID expect that there would be an entire writing on this title! Too funny! Have a great day, Ricky1024! God bless and hugs, Susanne
reply by the author on 23-Jun-2016
lmao...yes, I DID expect that there would be an entire writing on this title! Too funny! Have a great day, Ricky1024! God bless and hugs, Susanne
Comment Written 23-Jun-2016
reply by the author on 23-Jun-2016
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Finished and amazing SHIT!
.Ricky
Comment from AnnieDawn
I give you five stars because I have read your works before and have thought them worth the stars. I look forward to the next chapter.
reply by the author on 23-Jun-2016
I give you five stars because I have read your works before and have thought them worth the stars. I look forward to the next chapter.
Comment Written 23-Jun-2016
reply by the author on 23-Jun-2016
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Finished and amazing SHIT!
RICKY
Comment from robyn corum
Ricky,
I don't know what you had in mind here, but there isn't anything here but the title and the 'coming soon' announcement. ?? Are you planning to add/edit? Or did something go wrong while you were creating the post? Sorry, I can't give a full five stars for this, but please let me know when you correct it and I'll rerate! Thanks!
reply by the author on 23-Jun-2016
Ricky,
I don't know what you had in mind here, but there isn't anything here but the title and the 'coming soon' announcement. ?? Are you planning to add/edit? Or did something go wrong while you were creating the post? Sorry, I can't give a full five stars for this, but please let me know when you correct it and I'll rerate! Thanks!
Comment Written 23-Jun-2016
reply by the author on 23-Jun-2016
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Thanks so much for your review and kind thoughts Finished now and AMAZING SHIT!
RICKY