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ShedMoreTears Fairy Tales@Fables"

Viewing comments for Chapter 38 "Attack on Termiteville!"
A delightful Childen Lesson Book.

5 total reviews 
Comment from mermaids
Exceptional
This work has reached the exceptional level

You have created a unique poetic tale. Since it is bug season here on Cape Cod, I can relate to the termites. Excellent use of words and a smooth flow of story in poetic form.

 Comment Written 30-Jun-2016


reply by the author on 30-Jun-2016
    Thanks so much for your review and kind Review!
    Ricky 1024
Comment from Dustybones
Excellent
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Well the story is a bit insane, of course, as you might know that when it involves bugs. I do like the names of the critters very much. dustybones

 Comment Written 25-Jun-2016


reply by the author on 25-Jun-2016
    Thanks so much for your review and kind thoughts of My poetry.
    Ricky 1024.
Comment from Susanne M. Psyris
Excellent
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lmao...yes, I DID expect that there would be an entire writing on this title! Too funny! Have a great day, Ricky1024! God bless and hugs, Susanne

 Comment Written 23-Jun-2016


reply by the author on 23-Jun-2016
    Finished and amazing SHIT!
    .Ricky
Comment from AnnieDawn
Excellent
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I give you five stars because I have read your works before and have thought them worth the stars. I look forward to the next chapter.

 Comment Written 23-Jun-2016


reply by the author on 23-Jun-2016
    Finished and amazing SHIT!
    RICKY
Comment from robyn corum
Average
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Ricky,

I don't know what you had in mind here, but there isn't anything here but the title and the 'coming soon' announcement. ?? Are you planning to add/edit? Or did something go wrong while you were creating the post? Sorry, I can't give a full five stars for this, but please let me know when you correct it and I'll rerate! Thanks!

 Comment Written 23-Jun-2016


reply by the author on 23-Jun-2016
    Thanks so much for your review and kind thoughts Finished now and AMAZING SHIT!
    RICKY