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Many bedtime stories for children.

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Comment from ExperiencingLiphe
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Yeah you have to keep the tent closed or watch out. I had a misquote sleep with me the one night. I slept through it but I woke up and found all his little marks that he left on me. What a precious little creature.

 Comment Written 28-Jun-2016


reply by the author on 29-Jun-2016
    Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a nice second part of the week.
Comment from Treischel
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Very interesting story about a family camping and learning a lesson about midges. Good family interaction is modeled too.

 Comment Written 25-Jun-2016


reply by the author on 26-Jun-2016
    Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a great and blessed Sunday.
Comment from Ulla
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Hi Ine, yeah those midgets are not very nice. Remember them well from Scotland. Now we have something similar here in Spain, but only for a short period. Good little night story you've penned here. All the best. Ulla;)))

 Comment Written 25-Jun-2016


reply by the author on 26-Jun-2016
    Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a great and blessed Sunday.
Comment from l.raven
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HI Ine, I am going back and fourth to try and catch up...I must say I don't know what midgies are...but I don't think I want to...your story is very well told my friend...and very well written...love ya Linda xxoo

 Comment Written 23-Jun-2016


reply by the author on 24-Jun-2016
    Thanks very much for your kind review, Ine. Have a great weekend. Like mosquitos.
reply by l.raven on 24-Jun-2016
    EeeeKkkk...I would hate to be where they are...you are always so welcome sweet girl...xxoo Linda love
Comment from MizKat
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Hi Ine,

This was really interesting to read like all of the things you write are. I enjoyed reading it and look forward to reading more too. Thanks for sharing this great little story.

Kat

 Comment Written 23-Jun-2016


reply by the author on 24-Jun-2016
    Thanks very much for your kind review, Ine. Have a great weekend.
Comment from MTF1955
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I had those bugs also considering they think the dinner bell was rung when I appear. Good sound advice about the oil and closeing the tent. Nice job. Mary

 Comment Written 23-Jun-2016


reply by the author on 24-Jun-2016
    Thanks very much for your kind review, Ine. Have a great weekend.
Comment from royowen
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And the moral of this story don't make promises you may not be able to keep, like walking home if what you claim comes to pass. It's a very good thing that Mama is wise and knows what's she's doing. A great little bedtime story Ine, well written I enjoyed it a lot. Well done, blessings, Roy

 Comment Written 23-Jun-2016


reply by the author on 24-Jun-2016
    Thanks very much for your kind review, Ine. Have a great weekend.
reply by royowen on 24-Jun-2016
    Most welcome
Comment from davisr (Rhonda)
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Midgies can be a pain, and very hard to avoid. Keeping the tent closed, and putting oil on the skin is a good idea, too.
Nice story about an experience in your life,
Well done,
Rhonda

 Comment Written 23-Jun-2016


reply by the author on 24-Jun-2016
    Thanks very much for your kind review, Ine. Have a great weekend.
Comment from c_lucas
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OFF and Raid. Add a smoky campfire for good luck. A less humid environment will help, also. This is very well written. Even the best motels will have bugs in them.

 Comment Written 23-Jun-2016


reply by the author on 24-Jun-2016
    Thanks very much for your kind review, Ine. Have a great weekend.
Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca
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Excellent bedtime story and I am not familiar with midgies. Are they like mosquitoes?
No other problems noted and a very cute and familiar read.

 Comment Written 23-Jun-2016


reply by the author on 24-Jun-2016
    Thanks very much for your kind review, Ine. Have a great weekend. Yep.