Comment from brenda bickers

Excellent

Hi Ulla,
good heavens how many times do women fall for this. Love is a powerful emotion that makes us do crazy things.
Just one small typo:
"They both went quite" should be "They both went quiet"
Good luck in the contest and well written.
Brenda:))x

 Comment Written 21-Jun-2016

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reply by the author on 21-Jun-2016

Aww, Brenda, Thanks for reading this. I've made the correction. You're right, women always seems to fall for this, blinded by love.I'm glad you liked it. All the best. Ulla:)xx

Comment from Bryana

Excellent

This is done by men all over, they do it specially
to widows, men know widows have money from
their husbands. I'm a widow but I would never give
a man money no matter how much I love him.


some time ago I saw a similar story on TV.

Un abrazo para ti.

 Comment Written 21-Jun-2016

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reply by the author on 22-Jun-2016

Hi Bryana, you're right, but I think women are capable of doing it as well. Thanks for a great review. Un abrazo, Ulla:)))

Comment from foxangie123

Excellent

A really nice and well thought of entry to the contest. I think that I don't know has gotten mixed up with I did know but failed to react appropriately. This is very great. Bravo.

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 Comment Written 21-Jun-2016

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reply by the author on 22-Jun-2016

Thanks very much, Angie. All best. Ulla:)