The Warning
A visit from my 100 year old self32 total reviews
Comment from LIJ Red
I zipped through this with no stumbles and no questions, so it rates five stars, in my opinion, and should be a good contest entry for the prompt.
reply by the author on 21-Jun-2016
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I zipped through this with no stumbles and no questions, so it rates five stars, in my opinion, and should be a good contest entry for the prompt.
Comment Written 20-Jun-2016
reply by the author on 21-Jun-2016
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Thank you. I appreciate your comments and the five stars.
Comment from sage17611
Your story is well written and interesting. The theme is very creative and stimulating to the reader's imagination, what a clever theme. It would be interesting to come back to our younger self and give ourselves a warning about the future, this is brilliant. The flow of the story is good, and narrated well. This should be a good contender in the contest, good luck.
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reply by the author on 21-Jun-2016
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Your story is well written and interesting. The theme is very creative and stimulating to the reader's imagination, what a clever theme. It would be interesting to come back to our younger self and give ourselves a warning about the future, this is brilliant. The flow of the story is good, and narrated well. This should be a good contender in the contest, good luck.
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Comment Written 20-Jun-2016
reply by the author on 21-Jun-2016
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Thank you. I appreciate your comments and the five stars.
