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Comment from Lisa Deverick
Gotta hand it to you on the word wrongatudes... It's a Bill original! LOL Your words convey a supreme message. Our world acts like a bunch of neanderthals ..
reply by the author on 21-Jun-2016
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Gotta hand it to you on the word wrongatudes... It's a Bill original! LOL Your words convey a supreme message. Our world acts like a bunch of neanderthals ..
Comment Written 21-Jun-2016
reply by the author on 21-Jun-2016
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Thank you, Lisa, for the excellent review. Bill
Comment from nomi338
What a wonderful phrase wrongatude. It could very well be said that one of the major problem areas that exist in the world today is directly related to wrongatudes. I don't know if you originated this term or not. Whoever did deserves a pat on the back for a job well done. Just as the writing of this great poem is deserving of praise.
reply by the author on 20-Jun-2016
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What a wonderful phrase wrongatude. It could very well be said that one of the major problem areas that exist in the world today is directly related to wrongatudes. I don't know if you originated this term or not. Whoever did deserves a pat on the back for a job well done. Just as the writing of this great poem is deserving of praise.
Comment Written 20-Jun-2016
reply by the author on 20-Jun-2016
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You heard it here first. I should send some of these to Webster's and get them put in the next dictionary. Thank you for the generous review. Bill
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Good idea, it may well be worth a try at least. The worst thing that could happen is that they might say no, but then again they might actually say yes.
Comment from Teri7
This is a very good 5-7-5 poem you have penned. It is so truthful. I love the art work you chose for this great piece. Teri
reply by the author on 20-Jun-2016
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This is a very good 5-7-5 poem you have penned. It is so truthful. I love the art work you chose for this great piece. Teri
Comment Written 20-Jun-2016
reply by the author on 20-Jun-2016
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Thank you, Teri, for the excellent review. Bill
Comment from Ginger Banks
So agree with this, our wrongatudes are beyond measure in this world today! It can be disheartening, but I say we all have to keep our chin up and our eyes on the One True Ruler to help us get through. This Haiku has a great message and I do like the wording. Thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 19-Jun-2016
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So agree with this, our wrongatudes are beyond measure in this world today! It can be disheartening, but I say we all have to keep our chin up and our eyes on the One True Ruler to help us get through. This Haiku has a great message and I do like the wording. Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 19-Jun-2016
reply by the author on 19-Jun-2016
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Thank you, Ginger, for the exceptional review. Bill
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You're welcome.
Comment from Hayley Solomon
I like the concept. If it wasn't a haiku I would say too short and expand, but since it is, take five stars and I agree with you, by the way.I like the word wrongatudes, it is suitably expressive!
reply by the author on 19-Jun-2016
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I like the concept. If it wasn't a haiku I would say too short and expand, but since it is, take five stars and I agree with you, by the way.I like the word wrongatudes, it is suitably expressive!
Comment Written 19-Jun-2016
reply by the author on 19-Jun-2016
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Thank you, Hayley, for giving this a look. Bill
Comment from GoodHearted Woman
Bill! This is great for a little-bitty poem. I LOVE made-up words and this is about as made-up as they get! Fanstory wants me to go on and on and on and on about these little tiny poems, so I'll just talk awhile I guess. I told you, didn't I, that my "young good-lookin' husband was a Ssgt in Viet Nam--everything at our house either has a sticker or a sign or a plaque or a calendar 15-20 ball caps with the marines on it. If you have Netflix, I think it's called The Last Bomb, taken from a soldier ON a B-29 with the old movie cameras but he does a good. I bet more will turn up as they die and others check out the back corners of closets etc. GHW
GoodHearted Woman Marcia
reply by the author on 19-Jun-2016
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Bill! This is great for a little-bitty poem. I LOVE made-up words and this is about as made-up as they get! Fanstory wants me to go on and on and on and on about these little tiny poems, so I'll just talk awhile I guess. I told you, didn't I, that my "young good-lookin' husband was a Ssgt in Viet Nam--everything at our house either has a sticker or a sign or a plaque or a calendar 15-20 ball caps with the marines on it. If you have Netflix, I think it's called The Last Bomb, taken from a soldier ON a B-29 with the old movie cameras but he does a good. I bet more will turn up as they die and others check out the back corners of closets etc. GHW
GoodHearted Woman Marcia
Comment Written 18-Jun-2016
reply by the author on 19-Jun-2016
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Thank you, Marcia, for the friendly review. I am glad your Devil Dog is Semper Fi. Your reply was very nice. I'll look up the film you mentioned. Happy day.