Comment from royowen

Excellent

I love this story, I'm not sure that's true that they poke their little bottoms over the edge of the nest an poo, do you? But I believe you, thousands wouldn't! This is nicely written Ine, articulately scribed in an absorbing way and very hilarious, your clever dad. Well done, blessings, Roy

 Comment Written 20-Jun-2016

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reply by the author on 21-Jun-2016

Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a great week.

reply by royowen on 21-Jun-2016

You too Ine,

Comment from Treischel

Excellent

A very cute story that is very well told. A great tale to tell on Father's Day about a father educating his children about baby birds. The surprise ending made me laugh.

 Comment Written 19-Jun-2016

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reply by the author on 20-Jun-2016

Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a great week.

Comment from Walu Feral

Excellent

Hahahaha! G'day Ine. This is a very cute little bedtime story for a big overgrown kid like me. It was a lot of fun to read.

A couple of observations...

"A brown and a yellow bird land(ed) near the nest."

"By the end of the day they must be deadbeat.(dead beat.)"

Well done mate.

Cheers Fez

 Comment Written 19-Jun-2016

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reply by the author on 19-Jun-2016

Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a blessed and lovely Sunday. Thanks for the tips.

Comment from Lynn27

Excellent

This was a fun and educational read. That a nice flow as I read. This good family type story for parents with young children.

Lynn

 Comment Written 19-Jun-2016

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reply by the author on 19-Jun-2016

Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a blessed and lovely Sunday.

Comment from P1

Excellent

lovely story heart warming about a fathers
relationship with his family. pleasure to read
and review

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 Comment Written 18-Jun-2016

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reply by the author on 19-Jun-2016

Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a blessed and lovely Sunday. Thanks for tips.

Comment from fionageorge

Excellent

Yes, Ine. Pity our toileting has to be more complicated! LOL! Lovely story. Great use of dialogue. And ... don't Dads always tell the truth? Thanks for sharing and warmest regards, Marijke :o)

 Comment Written 18-Jun-2016

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reply by the author on 19-Jun-2016

Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a blessed and lovely Sunday.

Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca

Excellent

Nice story for children and especially learning that dad did not lie...they really do.
No problems noted except the word deadbeat. The roughness of it threw me off.
Nicely done

 Comment Written 18-Jun-2016

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reply by the author on 19-Jun-2016

Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a blessed and lovely Sunday.

Comment from davisr (Rhonda)

Excellent

Aww, how cute. A great lesson for kids about the dedication of the parents to feed their young, and an even greater one about not standing under a nest. haha.
Great job,
Rhonda

 Comment Written 18-Jun-2016

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reply by the author on 19-Jun-2016

Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a blessed and lovely Sunday.

Comment from c_lucas

Excellent

Been there, done that too many times. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for a very good read. There is very good imagery.

 Comment Written 18-Jun-2016

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reply by the author on 19-Jun-2016

Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a blessed and lovely Sunday.

Comment from Ulla

Excellent

Awww, that's sweet Ine. The bird did it over the side of the nest proving exactly what the father is saying. I liked this a lot. Thanks so much for sharing. All the best. Ulla:)))

 Comment Written 18-Jun-2016

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reply by the author on 18-Jun-2016

Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a great weekend.