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I so desire to write well

Quinzaine contest entry

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Comment from Curly Girly
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If the desire is there and you put in the effort, which you do, then you will get there. Many people have this desire but few sit down and start. It's a long road. Nicole

 Comment Written 23-Jun-2016


reply by the author on 25-Jun-2016
    Thanks Nicole, good to see you. :-) Carolyn
Comment from l.raven
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HI Carolyn, I have never heard of this form...but you seem to have mastered it...and to answer your question...yes you are a talented writer...I love your poem...and a beautiful picture...priceless...Love ya Linda xxoo

 Comment Written 22-Jun-2016


reply by the author on 23-Jun-2016
    Thanks, Linda
    There are times when I plan to write anyway, so why not enter the contest
    at hand. ( I would love to win one in the process, LOL) This Quinzaine was
    one of those times. I am glad you liked it and the selfie...
    Love you too
    :-) Carolyn
reply by l.raven on 23-Jun-2016
    you are so welcome Carolyn...always sweet girl...smiling back at ya...love ya Linda xxoo
Comment from BeasPeas
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Nicely composed Quinzaine and I DO like the photo. Your statement is one we all dwell on, I think. Your questions work well with the statement. I wish you much good luck in the contest. Marilyn

 Comment Written 21-Jun-2016


reply by the author on 22-Jun-2016
    Thanks Marilyn, :-) Carolyn
Comment from Gloria ....
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Carolyn I really enjoy your Quinzaine entry. Paired with your own picture it's a delightful read.

Thank you so much for sharing and I wish you all the best in the contest. :))

Gloria

 Comment Written 20-Jun-2016


reply by the author on 22-Jun-2016
    Thanks Gloria, glad you liked it. Yep that's me alright.. :-) Carolyn
Comment from Jim Lorson Sr
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Carolyn, this is an excellent contest entry with your first line telling us what you desire. Then the first question asking if you write well, I say very well. Then the second question asking the reviewer if they write and my answer, yes I do!

Love this contest entry and I wish you well.

Enjoy this wonderful day of love and life that God has given us,,,,,,Jim

 Comment Written 19-Jun-2016


reply by the author on 22-Jun-2016
    Thanks Jim, I am glad you enjoyed this entry. I loved your reply. :-) Carolyn
Comment from sweetwoodjax
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this is an excellent write, Carolyn, you did an excellent job writing this quinzaine poem, I wrote my first one for the contest too, harder than it looks. I enjoyed reading yours and wish you the best of luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 19-Jun-2016


reply by the author on 22-Jun-2016
    Hi there, yes they are more difficult that you would think them to be. I will have to look yours up.
    Take care my friend. I know you are having hard days. :-) Carolyn
Comment from jmdg1954
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Howdy, Carolyn. I'm dropping in today as I just got back from Annapolis where my daughter got married. It was a great two days away and a wonderful ceremony, food, drink, dancing and family!

Oh, by the way... you are an awesome writer!!!!!!!!

John

 Comment Written 18-Jun-2016


reply by the author on 22-Jun-2016
    Hi there John,
    Congrats on the new son-in-law.... I pray they will have a happy marriage.
    Thank you for liking this silly little poem and for the compliment.
    Cards are not doing well consistently but haven't checked the Yankees, How are they
    doing? I hardly ever watch a game anymore. We stay busy, I don't know when we had
    time to work. LOL
    :-) Carolyn
Comment from krys123
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Hi Carolyn;
-I really enjoyed and was entertained by your Quinzaine formatted piece of poetry where there was an inquisitively questioned writing at others do right And also a reference to where and that you write a desire to write well.
-The pictures a great personal photograph of yourself and I found it very appropriate, supportive and relative to the conceptual beam of your writing.
-Your format requirements for a Quinzaine formatted poem.
-Good luck in the contest Carolyn and may the good Lord be with you always.
Alex

 Comment Written 18-Jun-2016


reply by the author on 22-Jun-2016
    Thanks dear Alex
    I would love to win one of these silly things. LOL
    I appreciate your comments and that you think it was
    appropriately written.
    Love, Carolyn
reply by krys123 on 24-Jun-2016
    One time you shall win Carolyn and That day I should congratulate you.
    Alex
Comment from Susanne M. Psyris
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Nice Quinzaine Poetry entry into the contest. Wish you best of luck. We all desire to write well, but when it comes right down to it, you have to have thick skin for the comments in order to pursue it religiously! This IS well-written. God bless and hugs, Susanne

 Comment Written 18-Jun-2016


reply by the author on 22-Jun-2016
    Thanks, Susanne
    I am glad you like it and that you thought it was ok for the contest.
    I hope you have a blessed day as well....
    :-) Carolyn
Comment from MizKat
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Hi Carolyn,

I loved your little Quinzaine poem you've written and also the lovely picture you've used with it. I loved reading it and looking at the picture too. Of course you've always been one of my best friends on FanStory.

Kat

 Comment Written 18-Jun-2016


reply by the author on 22-Jun-2016
    Dear Kat,
    And likewise on the friendship..
    I so enjoy your work as well and find myself thinking of you and
    your health. I pray for your well being.
    Thank you for liking what I write. That means a lot to me.
    Love, Carolyn
reply by MizKat on 22-Jun-2016
    Hi Carolyn,

    I'm very happy that we met on here. God knew what He was doing when He made us friends. I have aches and pains every day, but I still love reading everyone's work and will keep writing my own. Thanks so much for praying for me.

    Kat