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Comment from BeasPeas
Chapters are just long enough. Not overly long to the point where the reader losses interest or too short. Both tipsy, Liz and Russ banter back and forth, which takes on a sexual innuendo near the end. Marilyn
reply by the author on 28-Jun-2016
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Chapters are just long enough. Not overly long to the point where the reader losses interest or too short. Both tipsy, Liz and Russ banter back and forth, which takes on a sexual innuendo near the end. Marilyn
Comment Written 27-Jun-2016
reply by the author on 28-Jun-2016
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Marilyn
Thanks for catching up. It was nice to read two good reviews in succession, especially by you.
I appreciate your compliments.
Thanks for the high ratings.
Looks like 964-968 pages is the magic number. I don't usually review a post much longer than that.
It's probably just me, but I don't see how a writer can expect a reviewer to read an exceptionally long post.
I shouldn't say anymore, in case I find the need to do the same.
Marv
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Hi Bill. Here is my practice. I always have at least one book going to read a few pages at night. Short reads are where it's at for me. Too lengthy and I pass them by, even poetry. If it's said once well, it doesn't have to be said two or three times in the same piece. In poetry, though, some forms require repetition of certain lines. I think the length you mention is appropriate in prose. :) Marilyn
Comment from Gloria ....
Love this from you magnificent quill. Romantic comedy is a category the site should introduceincludingsteampunk,gothic and more.
great job.
reply by the author on 16-Jun-2016
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Love this from you magnificent quill. Romantic comedy is a category the site should introduceincludingsteampunk,gothic and more.
great job.
Comment Written 16-Jun-2016
reply by the author on 16-Jun-2016
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Gloria
Thanks for reviewing this chapter. I appreciate your kind words.
Perhaps writers should be allowed to call their work whatever they want. I just started using the term, Rom/Com, in the author's notes.
Thanks for the five stars.
Marv
Comment from Ginger Banks
Excellent dialog, no confusion of who spoke what or who is speaking to whom. I honestly thought Russ a young man perhaps still in high school or just going into college, because of the way he speaks and appears to get tongue-tied; but I realized that's just how he speaks. I like the whole scene, it's well put together, concise and the characters are fun. Thank you so much for sharing your work!
reply by the author on 16-Jun-2016
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Excellent dialog, no confusion of who spoke what or who is speaking to whom. I honestly thought Russ a young man perhaps still in high school or just going into college, because of the way he speaks and appears to get tongue-tied; but I realized that's just how he speaks. I like the whole scene, it's well put together, concise and the characters are fun. Thank you so much for sharing your work!
Comment Written 16-Jun-2016
reply by the author on 16-Jun-2016
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Ginger
I can't thank you enough for all your encouraging words and compliments.
You may not think this scene is so concise after I tell you it started in chapter 36.
Liz is 26, Russ is 25.
I look forward to sharing my work with you whenever you wish.
Thanks for the 5 stars.
Marv
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You're welcome.
