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Viewing comments for Chapter 35 "The Notebook and the Pen"A delightful Childen Lesson Book.
5 total reviews
Comment from YvonneAguilar
The story is great. It seems like it would be an enjoyable read. The picture with the story adds to the substance of the story. It was nice to read.
reply by the author on 23-Jun-2016
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The story is great. It seems like it would be an enjoyable read. The picture with the story adds to the substance of the story. It was nice to read.
Comment Written 23-Jun-2016
reply by the author on 23-Jun-2016
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Two more coming now and Thanks!
Ricky
Comment from essence56
Pretty good. The flow sometimes kind of threw me off, but after taking time to read again, the sense of it all came to me. You are such a different type of writer and one must focus and really dig deep into thought to get the real meaning. Good job...
reply by the author on 17-Jun-2016
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Pretty good. The flow sometimes kind of threw me off, but after taking time to read again, the sense of it all came to me. You are such a different type of writer and one must focus and really dig deep into thought to get the real meaning. Good job...
Comment Written 17-Jun-2016
reply by the author on 17-Jun-2016
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Thanks for stopping by and enjoying my works.
Ricky1024
Comment from EMB
I was keeping up for a while, even when Annie Oakley appeared, but the it got a bit abstract (as is your style), and I had to read several lines more than once, getting a different understanding each time. But hey, that's all good, my friend. :)
reply by the author on 16-Jun-2016
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I was keeping up for a while, even when Annie Oakley appeared, but the it got a bit abstract (as is your style), and I had to read several lines more than once, getting a different understanding each time. But hey, that's all good, my friend. :)
Comment Written 16-Jun-2016
reply by the author on 16-Jun-2016
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Finished now and thank so much for your review and time.
Ricky...
Comment from Brett Matthew West
Well written story about the friendship of the notebook and the pen. Goes to show even those with differences can make good friends.
Be interesting to see where you take this "And to be continued later on today".
reply by the author on 16-Jun-2016
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Well written story about the friendship of the notebook and the pen. Goes to show even those with differences can make good friends.
Be interesting to see where you take this "And to be continued later on today".
Comment Written 16-Jun-2016
reply by the author on 16-Jun-2016
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My thanks Fred, I love to write children's stories I have several books and published yet it more than once about a super cat dog Ninja I have 20 chapters of that rating did that about a decade ago I have this shed a tear and said more to your fairy tales and fables of the listed in here between those two others probably about 75 pieces plus more that I haven't even presented yet um I will finish this piece today I was too busy yesterday my female ex girl friends birthdays today so I'll have the time I know exactly what I'm going to do with it but thanks for stopping by always appreciative of Ricky 1024
Comment from c_lucas
The notebook holds the paper which gives the pen the ability to exert its strength. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for a very strong read.
reply by the author on 15-Jun-2016
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The notebook holds the paper which gives the pen the ability to exert its strength. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for a very strong read.
Comment Written 15-Jun-2016
reply by the author on 15-Jun-2016
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Thanks Charlie for stopping by I've written this book has 35 eighties children's type fairy tales the other book before I can't remember how many was a nap probably at least 50 or more and then in my various notebooks I have others that I just haven't put it back on on the internet yet or Huron same story I mean I probably getting about a hundred of them and I use all kinds of things from insects to inanimate objects like the notebook and a pen and of course a pumpkin that was thrown in the wrong field a Christmas tree nobody wanted it I usually try to tie them and blend it was some form of sympathy grief there is death even though it's a children's book then there's a heaven and there will always be a message now there will be part 2 of this and completion of it today is basically all my grief it's all true of the book The Father's really hard it wouldn't keep coming down from the e was written 12 years ago of course you never did it in the desk but it has been ignored I have written probably at least probably at least 15,000 grieving pieces out of the hundreds of thousands of poems are written throughout all kinds of books all my work and so will Sprint offer a 650 notebooks and computer paper I am going to start publishing I have you interested in the first book of life so we'll see how that goes I have to I have the director of the LSW Laura has me ready to go on the show The View with me so continue to check out some of my children's or in the shed a tear or the book of Jay I'm going to take a lot of work to him through that and then get back to me let me know what you think alright just take care Wiki 1024 this reviews coming through it an Android Galaxy phone would run and send his and Grandma cars
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My thanks guys for ever so much for stopping by and I'm glad you enjoyed it I will place the second part of this out later on today it'll probably be the conclusion I'm not sure yet got to see what comes up and I take care of as always I appreciate acquire as you stayed here at the store