Fleeting Impressions
The transformational power of rain5 total reviews
Comment from foxangie123
This is down right beautiful. The font is way small on this end but one can read it and find it most amazing and remarkably creative. Best of wishes at the booth.
reply by the author on 11-Jun-2016
This is down right beautiful. The font is way small on this end but one can read it and find it most amazing and remarkably creative. Best of wishes at the booth.
Comment Written 11-Jun-2016
reply by the author on 11-Jun-2016
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Thank you so much, Foxy, for the wonderful review. I am concerned about the font size, though, when I view it via the booth it seems fine. Do you view it differently since you work for FS?
Comment from Bill Schott
This 5-7-5 about nature, Fleeting Impressions, take our minds to the transparent to translucent beauty of the world seen through the rains. Nice.
reply by the author on 11-Jun-2016
This 5-7-5 about nature, Fleeting Impressions, take our minds to the transparent to translucent beauty of the world seen through the rains. Nice.
Comment Written 11-Jun-2016
reply by the author on 11-Jun-2016
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Thank you so much, Bill; your generous rating and insightful comments are very encouraging to me!
Comment from Ginger Banks
This has all the required elements, yet still it is unique and thought provoking, through the description of a rainy day by way of a window facing into it.
Thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 10-Jun-2016
This has all the required elements, yet still it is unique and thought provoking, through the description of a rainy day by way of a window facing into it.
Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 10-Jun-2016
reply by the author on 10-Jun-2016
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Thank you so much for your generous rating and encouraging comments--both are very much appreciated!
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You're welcome
Comment from jusylee72
Beautifully written nature five seven five. Watercolor world is my favorite line . It is sweet and colorful. I find short poems hard to critique so I like to express my over all impression. It was wonderful.
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2016
Beautifully written nature five seven five. Watercolor world is my favorite line . It is sweet and colorful. I find short poems hard to critique so I like to express my over all impression. It was wonderful.
Comment Written 09-Jun-2016
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2016
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Thank you so much for the generous rating and encouraging comments; both are very much appreciated!
Comment from Selina Stambi
Watercolour world ... how lovely! That's exactly what it is, but I'd never have thought to describe it this way.
Enjoyed the haiku. Best wishes for the contest.
Sonali
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2016
Watercolour world ... how lovely! That's exactly what it is, but I'd never have thought to describe it this way.
Enjoyed the haiku. Best wishes for the contest.
Sonali
Comment Written 09-Jun-2016
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2016
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Thank you so much for the generous rating and encouraging comments; both are very much appreciated!