Comment from Ricky1024

Excellent

Hi Mike!
Do you sleepwalk?
Sleep Talk?
I do when I am not alone.
Tee hee hee!
I like to leave and travel by leaving my body but can't quite figure it out?
Ricky...

 Comment Written 08-Jun-2016

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reply by the author on 08-Jun-2016

Whats up Rick...-smile-
me no....I don't guess so anyway. I saw my brother do it once....I was in living room watching tv ...when he came out of the bedroom...went into the kitchen, lifted the garbage lid...and let go a steady stream of oh no. Swears to this day he didn't do it...but he did. ah that's hard part getting back in...you and I know it...-smile-...love to you Bro-

reply by Ricky1024 on 09-Jun-2016

Hi Mike!
Good to hear from you!
Ricky..

Comment from l.raven

Exceptional

Hi Michael, I believe dreams can come true...just believe...

buried treasure takes effort to unearth
and dreams see reality
only through mortal windows of faith
I love Bruce Springsteen's music...and this video was very touching...
your words are written from your heart Michael...
so unique to you...
well written...love Linda xxoo

 Comment Written 08-Jun-2016

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reply by the author on 08-Jun-2016

Hi Linda...-smile-
why thank you....you make that dreamcatcher yet...? haha
ah well I'm going break for a while...got some stuff to do. love to you sweetheart-

reply by l.raven on 08-Jun-2016

you better believe I will...no more nightmares...get some sleep tonight...love to you too...xxoo

Comment from ~Dovey

Excellent

Hi Michael,

I think you are wandering on the right road to find Walt Whitman. That is one of the most famous pictures of him, I think, and a good choice for illustration. Keep walking with him and share the wisdom you glean with the rest of us, ok? :)

Kim

 Comment Written 07-Jun-2016

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reply by the author on 07-Jun-2016

Hi Kim...-smile-
ah I'm a poet ...we all run to each other sooner or later.
yes, I liked the picture....its apparent he wasn't concerned with appearance or was afraid of razor blades.....haha just messing. thank you Dear....always my pleasure to see you. love to you...Michael.

Comment from AnnaLinda

Excellent

Hi Mike,

I enjoyed reading your free verse poem.
It had a nice flow to it and it's contemplative.
Offers food for thought for your readers.

I surely am a fan of Walt. He's even in my
family tree. I like your repeating stanza
and I think I understand the message
you are conveying.

"harmonic in tune to life's natural music
captures the whispers of breeze and sunbeams
bright as white noise"

Beautiful!

Linda

 Comment Written 07-Jun-2016

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reply by the author on 07-Jun-2016

Oh no...listen man...i'm sure he's a great guy. I fell in love with "mother and babe" the first time I read it...it followed me to this day. Just some of them are very long...my attention span is shot. haha thank you Beautiful...-smile-....not sure how close I am to his "style" so I put his picture up-there...-headshake-...above average intelligence, i'm trying to tell ya...haha love to you...Michael

reply by AnnaLinda on 07-Jun-2016

I did see his influence in this one Mike...maybe that's why I understood it more than most of yours...no insult intended...we have to be true to our own style...You can't help it you are over my head:) My attention span is shot too...to say the least.

reply by the author on 07-Jun-2016

huh....welt...lol......thanks. I don't think you're doing it right, most of mine are supposed to be read at night when undressed and the mood just right....ahahah. ah its part of the "never heard" before school of thought I subscribe to....okay, let me go cry and get it my system....love to you-