Comment from BeasPeas

Excellent

Nicely done in this 2-4-2. The love is in her face--hard to see his, but I imagine a similar look in his eyes. Beautiful girl and I hope they'll be happy forever. Marilyn

 Comment Written 08-Jun-2016

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reply by the author on 09-Jun-2016

Hi Marilny. Many thanks for your read and review and yes they both had much love in their eyes. And I am sure they will be happy forever Cheers to you Chrsitine

reply by the author on 09-Jun-2016

Hi Marilny. Many thanks for your read and review and yes they both had much love in their eyes. And I am sure they will be happy forever Cheers to you Chrsitine

Comment from Bill Schott

Excellent

This 2-4-2, True Love, makes good use of the limited "syllabage" and holds love up as a worthy topic. Marriage is a fine thing to romanticize.

 Comment Written 08-Jun-2016

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reply by the author on 08-Jun-2016

Hi Bill, Yes marriage is a fine thing to romanticize and the syllabage ( love this Ha ha) was challenging and Thank you for reading my 2-4-2 much appreciated Cheers Christine😃

Comment from sage17611

Excellent

What is unique idea for a 2-4-2 poem. The flow is good along one thought, the words are very descriptive of a couple in love. The picture accents the poem nicely, and stimulates the imagination. A picture is worth a thousand words, and their love is truly "captured." Good luck with the contest.

 Comment Written 07-Jun-2016

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reply by the author on 08-Jun-2016

Hi Sage, Thanks for reading and reviewing my poem . as soon as I saw this image I knew It was the one I could use in this type of contest I am glad it worked OK and alooweed the reader to see the love in their eyes. Cheers Christine😃

Comment from Pam (respa)

Excellent

-Very nice photo; thanks for sharing.
-Good format and poem.
-I think eyes can reflect many things.
-I am sure on this special day they did see their love for each other captured.
-Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 07-Jun-2016

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reply by the author on 08-Jun-2016

Hi Respa1 Thanls so much for your feedback on my poem for this contest. It was a lovely day and they were so happy and in love I had to share this image and hope my words did them justice. Cheers my friend Christine😃

reply by Pam (respa) on 08-Jun-2016

You are very welcome. I am glad it was a lovely day; I think your words did them justice.

Comment from rspoet

Excellent

This is a fine entry for the contest
Exact syllables at 2-4-2
There is nothing quite like true love
Captured in the eyes
and everything else, as well
Excellent picture and poem match
Good luck in the contest

 Comment Written 07-Jun-2016

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reply by the author on 08-Jun-2016

Hi rspoet, Thanks again for reading my work and This 2-4-2 only allowed me a few sylllables so I tried to do justice to this image and pleased it worked well for you Cheers as all ways my friend Christine😃

Comment from Susanjohn

Excellent

AWWWWWE is there anything more to say??? nice little 2-4-2 poem! enjoyed reading and good luck with the contest!!! great picture too :-)))

 Comment Written 07-Jun-2016

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reply by the author on 08-Jun-2016

Hi susanjohn. I am pleased you like this and Thank you so much for your review and good luck wishes. win, lose or draw it was worth the write Cheers to you have a great day Christine😃

Comment from LateBloomer

Excellent

Hello Chrissy710, A great contest entry, I especially liked, "captured." When you're in love your whole mind, body, and will is captured. As this is a contest entry, I wish you good luck. LateBloomer

 Comment Written 07-Jun-2016

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reply by the author on 08-Jun-2016

Hi LateBloomer. Thanks for your lovely review and I wanted the words to ssay as much as the picture and captured just seemed to be the one to highlight their eyes . Many Thanks for reading this and for your good luck message Cheers Christine 😃

Comment from heyjude

Excellent

What a wonderful job on this 2 4 2 for the contest. How sweet. Love does shine in a brides eyes. The picture is great too. Good luck in the contest

 Comment Written 07-Jun-2016

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reply by the author on 08-Jun-2016

Hi heyjude, Yes the love did shine in bboth their eyes thos day was very special to both of them. Thanks for your kind words and for stopping by to read my work and for youR good luck message Cheers to you Christine😃

Comment from JennC

Excellent

This is a nice 2-4-2 contest entry. Great job with the syllables. You conveyed a lot in just a few words. Such a nice way of describing a wedding photo. Very well done. Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 06-Jun-2016

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reply by the author on 06-Jun-2016

Hi JennC. Thank you for having a read and giving this a review. I do appreciate your words and I tried to do justice to this image in a few words . Thanks for your good luck wishes also Cheers Christine

Comment from mvbrooks

Excellent

Congratulations on this wedding. It's obvious you are close to your niece and this poem is a positive tribute to both her new marriage and to your enduring relationship. Pithy yet deep with meaning.

 Comment Written 06-Jun-2016

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reply by the author on 06-Jun-2016

Hi mybrooks, Many thanks for you good wishes and kind words for my poem. i wanted the words to portray the love in their eyes and hearts as it is genuine and they are so happy. Cheers Christine